Rett

Jul 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Was Offered Cherries

I Was Offered Cherries

The grapes were all ripened.
They clung to the vine,
And the air was redolent
With the sweet smell of wine,
And I was offered cherries
By a young lass divine...

Her lips were like honey,
So sweet to the taste,
And budding young breasts
Over a thin lovely waist.
And I was offered cherries
By a young lass so chaste...

Her hair was the color
Of a fine Chardonnay,
Her cheeks were a-blush
In the grass where we lay.
And I was offered cherries
By a young lass today...

— Rett, Jul 13, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Critiques

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

Rett

Smiles:) Barbara really good writing. Your title was well chosen. your rhythm flowed well from beginning to end. the beginning complimented the ending perfectly. overall great poem something sexy from grapes. that you did do

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you Barbara

I will do sexy, I just don't do explicit. That isn't sexy. *L* Thank you very much for reading and giving me feedback. Besides, it earned me $20.00. He has a tendency not to learn. He bet me about pizza once. Won money then. *LOL* Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

explicit

Smiles:) Barbara I kinda stay away from explicit anyway, sexy is fine. I also like challenges,

rahbar

17 years 11 months ago

a little more than romance.

Hello Rett..a very very beautiful poem with a provocative subject.great! Rahbar.

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Rahbar

Thank you very much. I tried to keep it a bit uh, tame. Let the reader wonder. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Rett

Nothing tame about this my friend, Just one question, where were you, or should i say where were you staring at the time of penning this, Like a fine wine, this should be savoured, Love the thought and imagination, Very Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Peter

Thanks my friend. As far as staring, well, I'm a married man you know. *chuckle* On a diet if you will. It was done on a bet. Thanks for reading. I was getting a bit worried about you. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

tbeaudet

17 years 10 months ago

Bravo Rett

and I thirst for more... Excellent as always.

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

your picture is awe struck

Smiles:) Barbara My in laws neighbor grand kids were at the light pole connected to their tailor pulling loose the wire from the house and pole. me and my husband stood speechless then their dad shown up and we finally breathe.

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you Tom

I appreciate the comments no end my friend. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill

2 Quills

16 years 10 months ago

well i’ll be darned…you

well i'll be darned...you were offered cherries and took 20 bucks all with the same poem? you are such a whore! lol Corey

Rett

16 years 10 months ago

ROFLMAO Corey,

You are crazier than I am! *LOL* Yep, I did collect my money. Respectfully, Rett: "Let us then turn this government back into the channel in which the framers of the Constitution originally placed it. " Abraham Lincoln

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago