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Jul 07, 2008
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Spellbound Death
Spellbound Death
In a drug induced stupor
she lay upon the floor,
not knowing where she was;
not caring anymore.
She watched cascading colors
as they flowed upon the wall
and never heard the screaming
of the children in the hall.
Her mind was slowly floating
upon a golden light.
She was watching smokey billows
when clouds obscured her sight.
As lovely flying sparkles
settled slowly to the ground,
she listened to distant voices
and heard the strangest sound.
They say she'll never speak again,
her throat is torn and raw
from screaming out in misery
at the horror that she saw.
Nothing is all that's left to her,
they died among the flames.
Now she's locked within herself,
can't even call their names.
She never heard their crying
nor felt the fiery glow,
trapped forever in the pain
where she is dying slow.
She'll never see their faces
nor take them to a show,
spellbound by the nightmare,
the Hell she'll always know.
In a drug induced stupor
she lay upon the floor,
not knowing where she was;
not caring anymore.
She watched cascading colors
as they flowed upon the wall
and never heard the screaming
of the children in the hall.
Her mind was slowly floating
upon a golden light.
She was watching smokey billows
when clouds obscured her sight.
As lovely flying sparkles
settled slowly to the ground,
she listened to distant voices
and heard the strangest sound.
They say she'll never speak again,
her throat is torn and raw
from screaming out in misery
at the horror that she saw.
Nothing is all that's left to her,
they died among the flames.
Now she's locked within herself,
can't even call their names.
She never heard their crying
nor felt the fiery glow,
trapped forever in the pain
where she is dying slow.
She'll never see their faces
nor take them to a show,
spellbound by the nightmare,
the Hell she'll always know.
— Rett, Jul 07, 2008
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Critiques
purplemoondoll
17 years 11 months ago
The slow steady rhythm
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Kaz
poewriter58
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks Chrys
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Each rhyming verse- count
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Cat
Calliope
17 years 11 months ago
Haunting write
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you
Janice Pearce
17 years 11 months ago
Spellbound Death
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks
leonard daranjo
17 years 11 months ago
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE FLOW
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Leonard
amalzamani
17 years 11 months ago
Octave with random ryhming scheme
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you
Andie Jean
17 years 11 months ago
Amazing
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Andie
tbeaudet
17 years 11 months ago
You've done it again, Rett.
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Tom
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Change in last line
tbeaudet
17 years 11 months ago
Perfect!
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks
rahbar
17 years 11 months ago
Genuine poetry.
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Rahbar
wolfycat
17 years 11 months ago
:)
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks Wolfy