Graves

How true - for every problem we face, there is someone out there with problems much more serious than ours. I love the last stanza. cheers ... leonard

nicely worded clarity of the human condition... makes one want to write.. loved the referance to graves.. enjoyed reading.. Richard

hye nice poem da theme is quite horrifying but when i read it it urns out to be beautiful it is touchng my heart

hye nice poem da theme is quite horrifying but when i read it it urns out to be beautiful it is touchng my heart

First off: "While looking out the window At dreams that can’t come true" - awesome line. I didn't read it at first in the context that Leonard did - I took it as a literal thing, and it came out nice and spooky! Leonard's interpretations made it real, and quite sad. I love it when you can get completely different responses... shows that it's a good work! ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"

Great write, as always. I like the line about dreams that can't come true, all the people we were supposed to meet and didn't. Our time is so short, distractions in the way Life is what happens when your plans go awry. Patty

Beautifully written and profound. Bravo, again. Tom

and full of clarity of ones own self,not many can beleive it can always get worse or that it already is for some people.Great write,poet. Lacy, P.S. Never say it can't get worse,cause it can,and life will prove it if you dont believe it,I know this to be a fact,lol Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

Smiles:) Barbara Putting pity parties in the grave is very unique. I don't like pity parties either, but do accept support and help.

Smiles:) Barbara

Your imagery here is fantastic~ I loved it~

I guess we all go through the vally at one time or another. Very good write. Sincerely, Linda

curious of course great poem I go into the great spin out pity party big time Addictions though played a part big time too am not pursuing that a whole week poison free feels damn weird just stay in the today greatest old grips are looking back its easy and even more to get stuck stuck I was for years just deleted years of crap from people I cant pretend are my "freinds" anymore just people that I thought made my Facebook Gmail look decorated bah Just keep family in there now and some close freinds felt so good to hit the delete key on it all As If I was going to die by letting that all just blink out of sight I have to thank Nature or the God or Creator more pay more kindness to my own family here My own child rather then the fakirs maybe work on myself too and write some more valueable poetry with a clearer head and heart Didnt get around to commenting on it till now!!!