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This One Day (in memory of 9/11)
This One Day
This one day, one beautiful crisp morning,
brightest sun in the clearest, bluest sky.
He thought about staying home this one day,
but instead he kissed his young wife goodbye,
instead he kissed his babies goodbye.
Wishing he missed that crowded morning train,
he drank his whole coffee standing up.
His coffee tasted so good this one day,
he didn’t know it would be his last cup,
it was to be his very last cup.
Thinking this one day about getting in shape,
kids need him around for several more years.
So he got off the elevator this one day,
and he decided to walk up some stairs,
this one day he'd climb up some stairs.
He stood staring at miles across the river,
towards his home and the family he loved.
When suddenly the blue sky turned black,
fuel and smoke poured in from above,
hell igniting just a few floors above.
Smoke too thick to see, too black to breathe,
he smashed windows with office chairs,
then hugging his children’s artwork,
like a fullback he ran for the stairs.
His heart was beating so loudly,
God mustn’t have heard his last prayers.
This one day, one beautiful crisp morning,
brightest sun in the clearest, bluest sky.
He really wished he stayed home this one day,
but instead he kissed his young wife goodbye,
instead he kissed his babies goodbye.
One day, this one day,
it really was goodbye.
Critiques
sweetness
17 years 11 months ago
Very powerful!!
prayersbyPatty
17 years 11 months ago
Wow
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
AWESOME
Secrets and Memories
17 years 11 months ago
Quite touching...
Janice Pearce
17 years 11 months ago
This One Day
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Congrats on Spotlight
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Wow, Tom
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Congrats on spotlight again
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
This was great
tbeaudet
17 years 10 months ago
Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
You are welcome
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 10 months ago
T love this bunches
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 10 months ago
I don't know how to get to you privetly but have a sugestion
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Tom
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Tom
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 9 months ago
I seem to like the last line of the first revison
tbeaudet
17 years 9 months ago
Sinbad
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
living it
MEL
17 years 8 months ago
Heartfelt and emotional