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Jun 24, 2008
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Precious Valentine
precious valentine
red construction paper
dull scissors
string and glue
broken crayon’s
scribbled letters spell
“mommy, I love you”
sleepless nights as young boys grow
maternal hands that mold the man
clutch beads until he takes a wife
but one thing you must understand
sweethearts come and sweethearts go
until he finds that special one
but the most precious of all valentines
is between a mother and her son
a special message from my heart
holds true until the end of time
remember this and every Valentine’s day
you’re my first
and my most precious
Valentine
— tbeaudet, Jun 24, 2008
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DarkinAZ
18 years 1 month ago
Great effort..
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Tome
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
Precious Valentine
sweetness
18 years 1 month ago
Tbeaudet...
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