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Jun 22, 2008
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Panic
Panic
There's a lightning storm brewing
In the mountains of the past
Rushing toward tomorrow
Like a cannon's mighty blast
The clouds of yesterday
On fire with the storm
And a hole is torn in heaven
Where the future will be born
And the rolling sound of thunder
Like the sound that foretells doom
Rushes across the landscape
Like a million sonic booms
As the heart is torn asunder
By the hurts from the past
And you wonder if the Angel Gabriel
Will sound his horn at last
And the rushing sound of horses
Like the hordes of hell are freed
Fill your mind with terror
And cause your heart to freeze
Fear not; for Armageddon
Is not loosed upon the world
It's just the panic stricken thoughts
Of one lonely little girl
There's a lightning storm brewing
In the mountains of the past
Rushing toward tomorrow
Like a cannon's mighty blast
The clouds of yesterday
On fire with the storm
And a hole is torn in heaven
Where the future will be born
And the rolling sound of thunder
Like the sound that foretells doom
Rushes across the landscape
Like a million sonic booms
As the heart is torn asunder
By the hurts from the past
And you wonder if the Angel Gabriel
Will sound his horn at last
And the rushing sound of horses
Like the hordes of hell are freed
Fill your mind with terror
And cause your heart to freeze
Fear not; for Armageddon
Is not loosed upon the world
It's just the panic stricken thoughts
Of one lonely little girl
— Rett, Jun 22, 2008
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RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Ronda
RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
I believe it
rider68
17 years 11 months ago
Hi Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Peter
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Jess K
rahbar
17 years 11 months ago
panic
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Rahbar
DarkinAZ
17 years 11 months ago
Great write
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Mark
themoonman
17 years 11 months ago
Hi Rett...
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Richard
Marius Surleac
17 years 11 months ago
good job!
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much. I
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Congrats on Spotlight!
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you
prayersbyPatty
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Many thanks Patty
Janice Pearce
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Janice
rider68
17 years 11 months ago
Greatly Deserved
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Peter
emy
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Emy
purplemoondoll
17 years 11 months ago
Brilliant - you ‘took me
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Kaz
tbeaudet
17 years 11 months ago
Another excellent peice
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Tom
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
brilliant piece of writing Rett,
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Brilliant Piece
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
Fair enough, friend