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Jun 22, 2008
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Panic
Panic
There's a lightning storm brewing
In the mountains of the past
Rushing toward tomorrow
Like a cannon's mighty blast
The clouds of yesterday
On fire with the storm
And a hole is torn in heaven
Where the future will be born
And the rolling sound of thunder
Like the sound that foretells doom
Rushes across the landscape
Like a million sonic booms
As the heart is torn asunder
By the hurts from the past
And you wonder if the Angel Gabriel
Will sound his horn at last
And the rushing sound of horses
Like the hordes of hell are freed
Fill your mind with terror
And cause your heart to freeze
Fear not; for Armageddon
Is not loosed upon the world
It's just the panic stricken thoughts
Of one lonely little girl
There's a lightning storm brewing
In the mountains of the past
Rushing toward tomorrow
Like a cannon's mighty blast
The clouds of yesterday
On fire with the storm
And a hole is torn in heaven
Where the future will be born
And the rolling sound of thunder
Like the sound that foretells doom
Rushes across the landscape
Like a million sonic booms
As the heart is torn asunder
By the hurts from the past
And you wonder if the Angel Gabriel
Will sound his horn at last
And the rushing sound of horses
Like the hordes of hell are freed
Fill your mind with terror
And cause your heart to freeze
Fear not; for Armageddon
Is not loosed upon the world
It's just the panic stricken thoughts
Of one lonely little girl
— Rett, Jun 22, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Ronda
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
I believe it
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Peter
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Jess K
rahbar
18 years 1 month ago
panic
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Rahbar
DarkinAZ
18 years 1 month ago
Great write
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Mark
themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Rett...
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Richard
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
good job!
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you so much. I
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
Congrats on Spotlight!
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you
prayersbyPatty
18 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Many thanks Patty
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Janice
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Greatly Deserved
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Peter
emy
18 years 1 month ago
Rett
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Emy
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
Brilliant - you ‘took me
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Kaz
tbeaudet
18 years 1 month ago
Another excellent peice
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
Tom
weirdelf
18 years ago
brilliant piece of writing Rett,
Rett
18 years ago
Brilliant Piece
weirdelf
18 years ago
Fair enough, friend
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