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The Sorcerer's Daughter

The Sorcerer's Daughter

Beguiling eyes, inviting thighs
And mischief on her face.
Ebony hair, skin so fair,
And lips that you can taste.

A sexy voice, perhaps by choice
And legs you cannot miss.
There're firm full breasts; a sweet caress,
And heaven's in her kiss.

Her charms are wild, a wanton child
And many men have sought her.
She's fiery needs, her soul to feed,
Beware the Sorcerer's Daughter!

No virgin queen, she's quite the scene
Merciless with her charms.
With Serpent's Gold, a clergyman's soul
Was lost within her arms.

Beauty and fire, a strong desire,
Some say the Devil taught her.
No man can quench this lusty wench,
Beware the Sorcerer's Daughter!

— Rett, Jun 21, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

Lots of fun

In S2 you need "there're" instead of "there's".....and I'm not sure you can quench a wench, although you can certainly quench her fire. It's a tempting rhyme, though. Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Synchro

Thanks, I hate it when I miss something that simple. Just a little flight of fancy. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
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poewriter58

17 years 11 months ago

rett

Another good write It's time for something we can work on here lol. Chrystalie
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

I'll try

Hey, I've been writing a long time and tend to polish and re-polish before I post. I always think that when I post there will be something I missed and I did, Synchro caught it. I do have a few I've been working on the last few days that are still rough as corncobs. I just might post one to see what happens. *LOL*. I tend to go through these spells where I write like crazy, then there is a dry spell. Unlike a lot, though, I tend to not worry about the dry spells as sooner or later they go away.BTW, I don't even know what this particular rhyme scheme is called, IF, it has a name or anything. I just tend to love the way it sounds rolling off the tongue. Any idea? Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
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Calliope

17 years 11 months ago

Absolutely enchanting!

I loved it. ...it reminds me of something...lol. Great flow and rhythm here.And i thought the 'no man can quench this lusty wench' line perfect.Great write.Very entertaining,thanks for the read,lol. Bravo! Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Lacy

Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I am sometimes prone to these flights of fancy as I call them. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Tom

Thanks bunches Tom, Once in a while I have flights of fancy. I am glad you enjoyed it. Rett: It may look easy, when you look at me, But it took years of effort, to become the mess that you see John Fogerty
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 2 months ago

Hey I like this Bunches

So many well taught by the devil and so seductive they are at times one thinks it sucks to be enlightened.But thank the Lord for repentence. Amen Great Write Donnie/Sinbad
Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks Donnie

I appreciate it. Evil is usually lots more seductive than being good. Respectfully, Rett: "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905