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The Best Man
The Best Man
I was born into wealth, my treasure is my Dad,
years too young to appreciate, the fortune I had.
Naïve I assumed, that all dads were like mine,
coming straight home from work, and always on time.
I remember, as a child, hearing the teapot sing,
breaking the silence at four, every workday morning.
Instant coffee and oatmeal, before leaving the door,
dark sky to and from work, along route eighty four.
Ice cream cones at the airport, my sisters and I,
coming back from the country, and the pony rides.
Dad made our lives void of all worries and cares,
lined us up to say cheese on the hallway stairs.
Santa never disappointed my sisters and me,
our friends couldn’t believe, what fit under our tree.
I remember the heat and the spots I would see,
when Dad turned spotlights on the stars of his home movies.
This man drew the blueprint, and I think, safe to say,
what he has perfected, is how to live the right way.
His influence on me, is both quiet and strong,
I try to do what’s right, even if at times it seems wrong.
Long before I chose a wife, before I asked for her hand,
I’d already chosen my father, to be my best man.
I was blessed with three boys, but only got to name one,
my father’s name was awarded, to my youngest son.
My goal as a father is to someday be,
as important to my boys, as my Dad is to me.
I pray that my sons, and over time we will see,
were born into the same wealth, that my Dad gave me.
Critiques
Calliope
18 years 2 months ago
This was exellent!
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
Beautiful
poewriter58
18 years 2 months ago
lovely
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks Chrys
normalil
18 years 2 months ago
The Best Man,
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you...
Tink
18 years 2 months ago
I enjoyed this work. it
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you and welcome.
Alobar
18 years 2 months ago
I noticed there were other
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
I do appreciate the constructive criticism
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 1 month ago
truth rings threw out this work
themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Tom..
Rett
18 years ago
The best man
tbeaudet
18 years ago
Thanks Rett