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The Best Man

The Best Man

I was born into wealth, my treasure is my Dad,
years too young to appreciate, the fortune I had.
Naïve I assumed, that all dads were like mine,
coming straight home from work, and always on time.

I remember, as a child, hearing the teapot sing,
breaking the silence at four, every workday morning.
Instant coffee and oatmeal, before leaving the door,
dark sky to and from work, along route eighty four.

Ice cream cones at the airport, my sisters and I,
coming back from the country, and the pony rides.
Dad made our lives void of all worries and cares,
lined us up to say cheese on the hallway stairs.

Santa never disappointed my sisters and me,
our friends couldn’t believe, what fit under our tree.
I remember the heat and the spots I would see,
when Dad turned spotlights on the stars of his home movies.

This man drew the blueprint, and I think, safe to say,
what he has perfected, is how to live the right way.
His influence on me, is both quiet and strong,
I try to do what’s right, even if at times it seems wrong.

Long before I chose a wife, before I asked for her hand,
I’d already chosen my father, to be my best man.
I was blessed with three boys, but only got to name one,
 my father’s name was awarded, to my youngest son.

My goal as a father is to someday be,
as important to my boys, as my Dad is to me.
I pray that my sons, and over time we will see,
were born into the same wealth, that my Dad gave me.

 

— tbeaudet, Apr 08, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Boston, USA

Favorite Poets: Patti Smith, Lucinda Williams, John Prine, Bruce Springsteen, Jim Carroll, Bob Dylan, Tom Waites

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Critiques

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Calliope

18 years 2 months ago

This was exellent!

Very raw and intense with the wealth of love coming from this poem.A+.I have Three boys as well and this touched me. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

From beginning to end I could vision the wealth love. Smiles:) Barbara
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poewriter58

18 years 2 months ago

lovely

Tribute to your Dad he should be very proud just a slight observation the last couple of lines seems to stick a bit last two more precisely seems like there are too many words in there just my opinion to an otherwise nicely written poem Chrys
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

18 years 2 months ago

Thanks Chrys

I do respect your opinion, but looking over the last lines I decided I have to leave it as is. I think the author oftentimes has a cadence that the reader doesn't always 'hear'. Thanks again for reading and commenting. Tom
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normalil

18 years 2 months ago

The Best Man,

I just loved this and can do nothing but applaud! My Dad was like yours, so nice to read this. Am new to the site, I know I will like it here with folk like you around. Everything in your poem sang a song to me, and reinforced all the wonderful memories I have of this Special Man, my Dad. Thanks again.
T

Tink

18 years 2 months ago

I enjoyed this work. it

I enjoyed this work. it reconnected me with loving memories of my step-father's love. very nice. i look forward to reading more of your poems.
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

18 years 2 months ago

Thank you and welcome.

I am a step-father, and being a step-child I think you would really appreciate my poem "Flesh & Blood" Thanks, Tom
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Alobar

18 years 2 months ago

I noticed there were other

I noticed there were other comments upon the rhythm of the poem, and I echo them. Some lines seem a beat two long, a few accents out of place to my ear, but as you say, "the author oftentimes has a cadence that the reader doesn’t always ‘hear’." So I will not become redundant and accept the artist's choice. As to the content, it was quite lovely, truthful and sincere, but not in an overly fake or plastic-sincerity kind of way. Real. This poem does not belong on a greeting card, it belongs on a shelf. I was blessed with three boys, but only got to name one, my father’s name was awarded, to my youngest son. ...makes you almost wish he had three names, eh?
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

18 years 2 months ago

I do appreciate the constructive criticism

and if we ever do get the "audio" or podcast I've seen mentioned on this site, this will be the 1st poem I record so everyone can hear the cadence. Thanks so much for your honesty and comments. Tom
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 1 month ago

truth rings threw out this work

nicely done and such a great gift and treasure you received from him I love the realization that you where to young to known then but now that all dads are not such treasure a blessing that has pass ed from father to son I do beleive by your works that your sons will have as many kind and thoughtful words as you do get this one on a shelf in deed Donnie/Sinbad
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 1 month ago

Hi Tom..

Heartfelt poem.. like Alobar says..seems very real..great tribute for your Dad...enjoyed the read.. Richard
Rett

Rett

18 years ago

The best man

You were so lucky and you realize how rich you were. I was the wild child and mom and dad divorced at 11. I left home early but some of the good memories I have is of my stepfather. He was quite the man my daddy wasn't whenever I was around and not wandering that is. Beautifully written and filled with love. Rett
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

18 years ago

Thanks Rett

Please read "Flesh & Blood", a poem written to my youngest stepson. Having had a good stepfather relationship, I think you will enjoy. Thanks again, Tom