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theladyblue
theladyblue
Jan 11, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dream Girl

Out of black satin lace Slips peachy beige delight Ginger brown waves Caressing her long line Ginger brown curls Adorning her succulent mound Silky smooth passion Fills her fiery eyes Luxurious limbs Flow fluidly from her torso In her sultry style She glides with delectable ease With the fiendish essence of strawberries and lust Now close enough to taste Her long legs spread over your width Body bending, just low enough Feel her heat and melt in her desire She takes everything she wants and nothing she needs Quivering with excitement Her moisture finds you Moving deliberately Racking your stiffness against every wall Slowly rocking her hips Rolling her belly Rippling around you Her hidden oasis tapped Actual insanity seeps through Opening lavishly Gasping in ecstasy Her body employing full dimensions Voluptuous breasts bouncing To the rhythm of self gratification Delicious hot lips Scream with pleasure Your every sensation enhanced Your every fantasy erect Eyes now potent Breath ragged She whispers in a smile "Wake up my love"
— theladyblue, Jan 11, 2008

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moonlilly

18 years 4 months ago

Ah ! Lovely just pure and

Ah ! Lovely just pure and simple are the words I give you. Just lovely and I could hear the hearts beating together and then as one. Thank you for these words that you haved shared with us. Hope that there shall be more. Moon Lilly
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T.Obatala

18 years 4 months ago

WoW! hated for this to end

WoW! hated for this to end but all great things do. again wowwwwwww!!!!!! peace obatala
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j_h08

18 years 4 months ago

Sounds like...

I have to plead the Fifth on this. Awesome write very delicious, and yet no calories gained only burned.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

One word to describe this

One word to describe this poem - wow. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

always room for more

more is on the way this i promise! thank you! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

Je pense...

très bienvenu vous êtes * i think you are very welcome! lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

haha

*takes a bow* lol thank you thank you "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

the fifth huh....

sounds like a yummy thought lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

lol

hope thats a good thing kaz! haha thanks for the comment! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

Definitely

Loved it all the way - what can I say? Its already been said - this one of your best by far! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

haha

Merci beaucoup! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

cold shower, anyone?

Or how about a bathtub full of ice? Seriously, emarie, this is sensual and lustful with tact. Erotica without vulgarity. Sexual tension at its best! ~ Ronda
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

hehe

thank ya! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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orgami

18 years 4 months ago

soulstorm

"slips peachy beige delight.." a great read a jewel to find O
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 4 months ago

Awwww..

I wasn't ready to wake up...what a sexy write...enjoyed reading.
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

sorry...:(

But thank you thank you! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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meic

18 years 4 months ago

Peerless and perfect subtle

Peerless and perfect subtle erotic verse … Anaïs Nin - eat your heart out. If I were to judge like a critic [perhaps] I’d rate your sweet language as prime. Your imagery’s glowing the cadence is flowing … in short your whole poem’s sublime. In my role as an ordin’ry guy [however] my reactions just match my desire. ‘Twas not my decision to conjure this vision which is setting my poor loins on fire. Both these guys are me [I suppose] And with both these personae I juggle. So, forgive me, my dear Whilst I just disappear To seek my dream lover - and snuggle. Thoroughly … yes, well … certainly thoroughly … Mike Me by Jasmine [3] - gotta love that 'tache!
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meic

18 years 4 months ago

Snuggles

There are snuggles ... and there are snuggles - judge for yourself: http://www.neopoet.com/node/5917 Mike Me by Jasmine [3] - gotta love that 'tache!
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

*shivers*

Damn that picture just kills me *rips top open so that you may have a clean shot at her heart* "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
Mark

Mark

18 years 4 months ago

I'm awake now

how in the world could I have been sleeping ? Great erotic writing. You say it with class. I also "ran" through this and did not studder umm I mean stumble ;-) one single time - nice nice ! Thanks, I don't see alot of these and it is a pleasure, Mark
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

well now the flood gate has

well now the flood gate has broken....hope you can swim...thank you so much! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

breathing is a very

breathing is a very important part of life...im glad you have found the ability yet again! lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

yes sir!

thanks so much! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

Oh if this was a poster I would pin it up

wake up my love I think I heard that A million times the first month I was married Tis no wounder I whine so much about that ex of mine I do so LOVE Nyhpos And I so Miss mine Lovely read I should read it again and agian Donnie/SINBAD snicker right back at ya Naughty but real nice
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

hmmm me a pin up...hell yes!

well i dont know many men who dont love Nyphos and i really dont know many women who dont claim to be one lol that my friend is the difference between truth and lies lol however for those of us who truly are ( and it would be all if the right man were present ) it is hard to find a man who can hold us and keep us grounded to their life... thanks so much!!! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 4 months ago

merci beaucoup!

"For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 7 months ago

Could you wake me by 7 am?

I am speechless, as well as wide awake now too. You have the brilliance to masterfully craft lyrical erotica into art without vulgarity, profanity or seediness. This was brilliant. Bravo! Tom http://www.neopoet.com/node/12548
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

sure sure 7 am it is! lol

I wrote this after a friend was complaining about how unfair most 'wet dreams' are lol Just a little teasing jaunt! Glad you enjoyed! and I don't know if I deserve the likes of 'brilliance,masterfully,ect...' but thank you very much anyway! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."
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orgami

17 years 5 months ago

re read

Voluptous breasts bouncing" now theres a fine image and a great line poetry can be enjoyed again and again
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 5 months ago

and they all said...

'amen'...lol <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'