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Still Listening

Still Listening

Ryan heard me whisper,
Merry Christmas to his mother.
He hears Rob and Ronnie laughing,
at funny stories of their brother.
He hears the prayers,
he hears the praise,
family and friends have given.
Ryan still hears everything,
while he waits for us in heaven.

The screams of fans in hockey rinks,
every time he scored a goal.
His fingers tap-tapping on the lid
of a brand new can of skoal.
The cymbals of his drumset,
Santa brought when he was seven.
Ryan can hear everything,
while he waits for us in heaven.

He heard our wails of anguish,
the warm night of August seven,
Ryan has heard everything,
patiently preparing for us in heaven.

So sit back, my love,
and watch the boys unwrap,
as the Christmas tree's still glistening.
Close your eyes and whisper,
"Merry Christmas, Ryan",
because I'm certain he's still listening.

c Copyright 2004

— tbeaudet, Dec 15, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Boston, USA

Favorite Poets: Patti Smith, Lucinda Williams, John Prine, Bruce Springsteen, Jim Carroll, Bob Dylan, Tom Waites

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meic

18 years 5 months ago

So hard to carry on with the

So hard to carry on with the festivities, I know. I'm sure your wife appreciates this lovely moving poem. Take care, my friend. Mike photo: me, late 20s / early 30s - with 'face furniture version 1'
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Wow

Oh man, my heart is breaking for you. Gotta stop now, too many tears to type. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Still Listening

Tom. [Wiping tears away] Simply beautiful tribute!! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Tom

I STILL cannot read this without crying and yet still there is that sense of hope involved. 'nuff said my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "For all you Scrooges who don't like Santa Claus or the true meaning of Christmas, BAH HUMBUG! For the rest of you, MERRY CHRISTMAS!" Rett
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Tom

This is a very sad and beautiful poem. Its good that you know he is still listening. Hold onto that thought. Gotta go get the kleenex. Patty
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 6 months ago

Tom

This is beautiful, and yes tearful. How many tears you and your wife must have shed. Ryan is waiting for you, and he still loves you. What a joyous reunion it will be.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Tom...

my heart goes out to you and your family during this Christmas season... may your days be fulfilling... thank you for posting this heart-wrenching piece... Richard
Mark

Mark

17 years 6 months ago

Tom

So sad it must have ripped ya apart to write it. Brings sadness to me as Nicole only saw two Christmas days with me. I know how you feel and I'm feeling it. I hope the best for you and your family always, Mark If you read that I feel lucky. Mark