Deleted for Publication

Published in my poetry anthology Soapbox Trophies. Release date TBA. Thanks for all your support! :)

— theladyblue, Dec 06, 2007

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Country/Region: USA

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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Sweet, yes - but more clover

Sweet, yes - but more clover honey than cane sugar. I was carried along so smoothly ... but how the sting in the tail cuts the taste of candy! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year Nadolig llawen & blwyddyn newydd dda geseënde Kersfees & gelukkige nuwejaar Mike

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

who me?...sweet....na

you think you got stung...gezz...thats a wound im still lickin' "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie

tbeaudet

17 years 7 months ago

My mother used to ask me

"did you meet anyone you liked better than yourself?" I enjoyed the images and the story. Tell me, what is your favorite poem you would recommend I read? Tom

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

haha

well lets just say that 'some people' like themselves waaaaaaaaay too much lol thanks for the read! honestly its hard for me to pick one favorite as they change with my moods...such a woman I know lol...but I do feel that the first 4 I posted here are some of my better works <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."

W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

Had I poem

T-Lady-B., I finally got to read this. It's terriffic. Great first sentence. Nice dig at the end. Poetic satisfaction. wcw