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theladyblue
theladyblue
Nov 26, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Country Bumpkin

Like the unremarkable bomb
My terms are veiled as a kitten
Waiting for the bait to be bitten
Bitten and Oh! The bang and rumble
Now they are stuck; my semi-rhymes
Written through the led and muck
To the roof of your mouth they stick
But hey it’s kosher to be amazed;
To imagine the musing of a hick
— theladyblue, Nov 26, 2007

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theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 6 months ago

why thank ya!!!

haha this was a fun piece for me. i am just playing with words lately and hoping something comes out of it. thanks so much for your time and opinion!!! <3 Emarie
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Running into a candy shop blindfolded with

10 minutes to grab what you can and you got the good stuff the flavors that go great together like friends and campfires go together like Mork and Mindy go together humble stumble Hill billy witish. Pass the word book you use to the right I want to get high on your highlights. Lady Blue I will to you be tuned. In ink, Dabbler
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

lol

Most entertaining. Will definitely have to visit more of your work. Your icon is killer, btw. (no pun intended) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"They gave you life, and in return you gave 'em hell. As cold as ice, I hope we live to tell the tale..." - Tears For Fears
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

full on pun excepted lol

thanks, i had fun with this one! as you can imagine many 'people' tend to discredit me due, not only to my location but as it happens my lack of formal education and training. this was just a little present for them lol haha suckaaaaaas.......... lol ne way lol please do read more of my work, I would be honored to have you opinion! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie