Melbourne in Yellows

I like this and the scene you have painted here and the way you have equated the leaves with yellow rivers. Nice work. Kaz

Well well I mean well put, your poem really explains how much interest you have in yellow. Perhaps,You also like sunflowers or maybe just a nice metaphor.Either way your writing was rather splendid,If you get the chance would you mind reading mine.Cause the rain is rarely plain in Maryland, I'm sorry Baltimore's a shame. I'm also sorry about my brain cramp, I've been suffering from a high thought sprain. Ahhhhh!!!! There it goes again

yet have spent enough time in Melbourne to love this poem. But you know, my major memories of Melbourne are better culture than Sydney, harder to make friends without knowing a clique, and the worst cold and the hot summer winds off the desert. love poetry. cheers, Jess

Since you bought the Ticket I thought "why not." 'Full of the yellow-leaf rains Pour on the Quiet terrains' Made it a trip to remember. In ink, Dabbler ps. On a yel...er..a.Lighter... note I can still see yellow!