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Anh Ha Long Tac bui
Member since November 29, 2021
Member for 4 years, 7 months
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Into the Bird-World
The two words
Pandemic and lockdown
Sound
Terribly lonely and upset
Cos
I have no one to talk
And I lose human languages
So
I begin
To go around and look for them
From steep-hill tracks of Kensington
To Holland Park
I fail
And I have nothing
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Hopelessly
I only hear from birds
Talking
Singing
Suddenly I feel
I could understand them a little bit
And I flying
Into the bird world
Anh Ha Long Tac bui’s timeline
- November 2022
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29 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2021
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29 MonReceived a critique
on Into the Bird-World from @Ray Whitaker
"Thanks for posting your piece here. It's a good read. I have written about "the pestilence" extensively. I've found that people want to read about it, I'm thinking that they are looking for the shared experience such as…" -
29 MonReceived a critique
on Into the Bird-World from @large marge
"I like the way this work depicts the feeling of isolation we've come to encounter, and how there is this plunge we take into that new reality. I also love this concept of the "bird world" and would love to see more poem…" -
29 MonReceived a critique
on Into the Bird-World from @Geezer
"I think that most of us have had that feeling of disconnection from the rest of the world at one time or another. I used to like to get up early and go for a walk in a wooded area, listening to the bird and seeing the a…" -
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29 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- October 2007
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02 TueReceived a critique
on Melbourne in Yellows from @IKnowNoBox
"Since you bought the Ticket I thought "why not." 'Full of the yellow-leaf rains Pour on the Quiet terrains' Made it a trip to remember. In ink, Dabbler ps. On a yel...er..a.Lighter... note I can still see yellow!" - September 2007
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06 ThuReceived a critique
on Melbourne in Yellows from @weirdelf
"yet have spent enough time in Melbourne to love this poem. But you know, my major memories of Melbourne are better culture than Sydney, harder to make friends without knowing a clique, and the worst cold and the hot sum…" -
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04 TueReceived a critique
on Melbourne in Yellows from @Emmanuel Moore
"Well well I mean well put, your poem really explains how much interest you have in yellow. Perhaps,You also like sunflowers or maybe just a nice metaphor.Either way your writing was rather splendid,If you get the chance…" -
04 TueReceived a critique
on Melbourne in Yellows from @purplemoondoll
"I like this and the scene you have painted here and the way you have equated the leaves with yellow rivers. Nice work. Kaz" -
04 TueFirst publication
Melbourne in Yellows
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04 Tue
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I just love reading and writing poems
Location: VIC
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