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Raine Vance
Member since June 14, 2026
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A Stranger At Home
When June out melts the winter
My numb limbs comes warm
A hated feeling that connects me to my birth place
Where I no longer belong
The summer skies here burns my youth into ashes,
Ashes that you will find under a cementary
This is a house, not a home anymore.
If my book turns to it last page, it has to end where I can find the house of my fantasies, where I can be buried under the grey cold skies of December, among those pale folks.
Raine Vance’s timeline
- July 2026
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01 WedReceived a critique
on from the diary ... from @davidgambro31
"This is a deeply felt piece of writing. You have captured a very specific, heavy kind of grief here—not the loss of physical life, but the slow, agonizing erosion of purpose and hope. It reads like a chronicle of burnou…" -
01 WedReceived a critique
on from the diary ... from @davidgambro31
"This is a deeply felt piece of writing. You have captured a very specific, heavy kind of grief here—not the loss of physical life, but the slow, agonizing erosion of purpose and hope. It reads like a chronicle of burnou…" - June 2026
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23 TueReceived a critique
on A Stranger At Home from @davidgambro31
"This is beautiful. That line right in the middle—'This is a house, not a home anymore'—is an absolute masterpiece of simplicity. It's so blunt, honest, and direct. You don't hide behind complicated words there; you just…" -
15 MonReceived a critique
on A Stranger At Home from @rumpleman
"I don’t critique. I admire & read for pleasure. Thanks for posting. I joined today too" -
15 MonReceived a critique
on A Stranger At Home from @Geezer
"at life through grey colored glasses. Keep writing, you are getting there. ~ Geezer." -
15 MonNew follower
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14 SunFirst publication
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14 SunJoined Neopoet
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About Me
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A Soul with no name, shape or form.
Location: EGY
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