Nature Mithya

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Tamed

Posted May 9, 2018 · 22 lines · 2 critiques

Moon light slips and seeps to touch
your delightful savoury curves as I peep
let my fingers trace their softness
to bring you pleasure quivers of joy,

Uncovered your glow with warmth
tremble in desire as my tongue probes
freely invade the privacy of your body
taking turns to lick dig and delve with zeal,

Raving uproars, barbaric clamour for more
induce a mayhem of desperation within
surge of a breathless surrender to my whim
cool work, widen’s resources to my glee,

While pleading cries make you go hoarse
demanding a full release from your woes

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to seek new potential to a unique fusion
dissipates energy from ecstasy raptures,

While the beast in me swells the warrior
as waves of urges from your bottom line
burst to incite, entreat longing for more
parts to open, enslaved by carnal intent,

Enchanting moments with naked passion;
Perform to tame your breaking resistance!

Nature Mithya’s timeline

May 2023
05 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2020
26 Sun

Received a critique
on Tamed from @samary
"Hi intimate poem I am a fan of a little erotic but I think you need a little polish to really make this work. I love your first line and most of your second there is a lovely flow ending in I peep which stopped me as a…"
26 Sun

Received a critique
on Tamed from @c lynn brooks
"line 1 I would add -in- after the word seeps line 2 perhaps the word peek would be a better word than peep All in all I find little wrong The wording was well thought out"
May 2019
05 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2018
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Envy from @raj
"I will keep reading your posts. As a policy..whenever I have doubts about how my comment will be received by individuals who have historically not liked them,,,i prefer to keep quiet rather than invite an acidic retort…"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
Tamed
"Moon light slips and seeps to touch"
Open thread 22 lines
08 Tue

Posted a poem
The Superlative Moon
"The silvery lustre in its new found aura"
Open thread 14 lines
05 Sat

Most-discussed work
Envy

12 critiques to date.
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Envy
"As the sun walks up the stairs"
Open thread 8 lines
05 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
October 2008
15 Wed

Highest posting month
October 2008 — 19 poems
03 Fri

First critique offered
on "Growing up Concrete" by @Eduardo Cruz
September 2008
28 Sun

First publication
Fried Egg

Nature Mithya

Tamed

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5 years of membership

on Tamed from @samary

on Tamed from @c lynn brooks

One year of membership

on Envy from @raj

Tamed

The Superlative Moon

Envy

Envy

Membership begins

October 2008 — 19 poems

on "Growing up Concrete" by @Eduardo Cruz

Fried Egg

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