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mwrigas
Member since May 19, 2009
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Dreamwalker Pt. II: Rivulets of Time
Dark rivulets of time rush past
In shadow from an overcast
Uncover what it means to me
Exposing all that comes to be.
To stay along the path confined
And fighting raging time refined
Above the crumbling sandbar lee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Precarious and ominous
My guiding spirits raise a fuss
We tread along to pay the fee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Dark rivulets of time rush past
Exposing all that comes to be
mwrigas’s timeline
- May 2024
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18 SatAnniversary
15 years of membership
- May 2019
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18 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2014
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18 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2010
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18 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2009
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07 SunReceived a critique
on Dreamwalker Pt. I: The Paradox from @greeneyes
"wow thats an amazing poem i loved it!" - May 2009
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30 SatCritiqued
"Ancient Moon Dust Black " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"i love the imagery in this poem...in it, i not only see the desparation, fear and depression of the victim, but also the dawning of a new awakening, a new beginning, that, with the release of the pain, the blood, will c…" -
25 MonCritiqued
"Reckless Angels " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Reckless angels may sometimes fall, but they always get back up again and when they do, they pick us up when we also fall and lead us where they may. I've always loved angel based poems. This is the first one i've seen…" -
24 SunReceived a critique
on Dreamwalker Pt. II: Rivulets of Time from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"I really like this poem, "exposing all that comes to be" is a great line, I even like the repetition of it throughout the poem. Can't wait to see the rest of your series. Peace N Love Katie" -
24 SunCritiqued
"Splitting Menagerie" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"dang! this is really good. i can feel the frustration, fear and love in this poem and the imagery is just awesome, powerful and makes the reader feel what the author feels. the rhythm is perfect and smooth. very well do…" -
24 Sun
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22 FriReceived a critique
on Dreamwalker Pt. I: The Paradox from @ginnydragon54
"That's really cool - it sounds almost Native American. Good job!" -
22 FriReceived a critique
on Dreamwalker Pt. I: The Paradox from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"This was very beautiful, stunning imagery and a romantic feel to it (though I'm not a romantic myself hehehe) I just love the night time, whole blazon moon image through out. It's delightfully haunting. You're fitting i…" -
22 FriReceived a critique
on Crimson Rapture Pt. II: Bocephus’ Revival from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Hmmm my muse simply loved this write. Blood and dark stuff. I'm not a fan of vampires either, but I must say the whole vampire thing sure makes for some great poems. If I remember right. this is the one you had issues w…" -
22 FriCritiqued
"Musical" by @infinite_dwarf
"i could practically feel the texture of the wood and strings of your guitar and resonate with the accoustics described in this poem. very well done. mike p. s. i love your favorite quote...i may wanna borrow it some tim…" -
22 FriCritiqued
"Dark Road~an acrostic " by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"A very well done accrostic with awesome imagery and smooth flow. A very difficult feat to accomplish in accrostics and you have done it exceptionally well. mike" -
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21 ThuCritiqued
"The Autonomous Lightning" by @sha_onarainyday
"i like the way you've merged the realities of life in with nature and woven a tapestry of the journey through life, good times, and bad. interesting twist to the mythos. very well written and a pleasurable read. I guess…" -
21 ThuFirst critique offered
on "The Autonomous Lightning" by @sha_onarainyday
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21 ThuReceived a critique
on Crimson Rapture Pt. II: Bocephus’ Revival from @infinite_dwarf
"What a dark and delicious little write. Loved the twist - it was a nice touch. ----------------------------------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest f…" -
21 ThuReceived a critique
on Crimson Rapture Pt. II: Bocephus’ Revival from @sha_onarainyday
"As a disclaimer, I'll say I'm not a big fan of vampire-themed things (in general). That being said, I think this would work well as an epic-style poem. I wish their was a uniform rhyme scheme to work with, to make it fl…" -
21 Thu
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20 WedReceived a critique
on Crimson Rapture Pt I: Sweet Crimson Dream from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Hey there new facebook buddy! I should add you to my friends list here on Neo too lol. Anyhoo, like I said before, I'm really into dark kinda stuff these days, this was really kool. I'm not terribly into vampires, but I…" -
19 TueFirst publication
Crimson Rapture Pt I: Sweet Crimson Dream
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19 Tue
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18 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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