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Marina M
Member since July 8, 2021
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Haunting Ghosts "Challenge #20: Unfriendly Ghost"
In the past of hopeful things,
What has this Time to grave?
When I am to look at you...
You see through me only as a Paine.
Foreclosure never mattered.
Though our hearts are not the same,
you deny and say they're compatible.
You'd erase me with my pain.
The dusk rises from heaps of ash,
down from heaven, falling grace.
Without a sound, you whisper long....
You'd killed me with my only trust.
Walking dead, you come alive.
If only with your grave...
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you'd admit I love you!
Wretched things are your safe.
If nothing ever mattered,
then why am I the same?
Everything I've ever done...
Will you take it all in vain?
My blood is slipping from my veins...
You'd better hold your taste.
For you- to take my final breath,
think hard before you blame.
The final chords are played in thrust.
My divine love, you'd lust till all were crushed!
My Spirit's intertwined with thine;
beware lest ye be judged.
And though you'd thought to kill me-
My time to rise above.
I am the only hell that haunts you,
as the only one once loved.
Marina M’s timeline
- October 2022
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31 MonContest commendation
Neopoet October 2022 Random Challenge The Unfriendly Ghost
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31 MonFirst contest commendation
Neopoet October 2022 Random Challenge The Unfriendly Ghost
with the poem "Haunting Ghosts "Challenge #20: Unfriendly Ghost"".
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03 Mon
- July 2022
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08 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2022
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22 TueReceived a critique
on I love you from @Ray Whitaker
"I think it is one of the longer poems I have read in awhile. The baring of your innermost thoughts is impressive to me. Still, I think there are at least a couple of poems in this. If you are not willing separate it out…" - July 2021
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15 ThuReceived a critique
on I love you from @Ray Whitaker
"a strong read. might be a couple of poems in this" -
14 WedReceived a critique
on I love you from @Triskelion
"a lament filled with a measure of passion that is so rare, I can't remember anything that compares. I enjoyed the time I spent reading this and can only hope to reflect equally. Don't give up writing. Thomas" -
14 Wed
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11 SunReceived a critique
on Us: You and Me, You in front of me from @Ray Whitaker
"long pieces I've found hammer home their images better if put in sections. I think there are two poignant poems here really like the separate lines that stand alone. well done." -
09 FriReceived a critique
on Us: You and Me, You in front of me from @Obadiah Grey
"Its a shame this forum doesn't support an audio section! because I feel this piece would shine there. Nice one, Marina. Obi." -
08 ThuFirst publication
Us: You and Me, You in front of me
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08 Thu
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08 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: NC, USA
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Haunting Ghosts "Challenge #20: Unfriendly Ghost" | Neopoet October 2022 Random Challenge The Unfriendly Ghost | – |