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LoVeMeNeVeRFoRgEtMe
Member since February 19, 2012
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cycles of a teenage heart break </3
how.......
how can you do this to me?
isnt it bad enough you hurt me?
i forget you for a moment
........ im happy
but now i cant stop crying and im
trying
whatever this is it sucks
i push and push you out of my mind
yet you find a way back in.
i tell you its ok and im fine
truth is im not im far from it.
i hate feeling this way
if i knew this would be so hard
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i would have stayd alone.
if i knew id fall for you this hard
i would have left it alone
but i didnt....
now im paying the price arnt i?
im waiting for this to end
will it ever?
i hope so because its too much
not being with you.
but i understand the choice you made
just wish things could change...
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- May 2012
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06 SunReceived a critique
on life<3 from @Cloudthings
"& always feel free to let advice that doesn't work for you, or feels condescending, just roll right off you, take the best from this place Rachel (& life) & use it to build what you already have so much of. I remember a…" -
06 SunReceived a critique
on comfort zone from @Cloudthings
"Hi R, thought I'd check out some of your other work... I think you most brave, I used to write at your age too, but never would have let anyone see my work. Good to see Cat here, & I'd second her advice, but don't give…" -
06 SunReceived a critique
on cycles of a teenage heart break </3 from @Cloudthings
"Hiya, had to read this since my teenage son is just going through what sounds very similar, & suddenly he wont talk to me about it. I think writing about it is really good. As a poem, it would appear it is definitely pr…" -
06 Sun
- April 2012
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15 SunReceived a critique
on comfort zone from @Candlewitch
"suggestions: Scared ,lost, alone (the comma belongs next to "scared" with a spce between it and "lost") like when nobodys home. ( nobody's as in nobody is) be careful of your punctuation and spelling when you post, as i…" -
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09 MonReceived a critique
on My Love..... from @loved
"the stalwarts have commented and ur texting ability u transpose as poetic creativity which this site ain't goin to preciate it no txt no txt hear it pl" -
08 SunReceived a critique
on My Love..... from @Eduardo Cruz
"If you love writing and wish to share it with us. then also love the texture of the wrtten word. In using it correctly you will find that people here are more receptive. it will show that you have respect for the writte…" -
08 SunReceived a critique
on My Love..... from @Eduardo Cruz
"If you love writing and wish to share it with us. then also love the texture of the wrtten word. In using it correctly you will find that people here are more receptive. it will show that you have respect for the writte…" -
07 SatReceived a critique
on ~ <3 Set Fire <3 ~ from @scribbler
"Welcome to neopoet. In answer to review request questions: Title: The~,3 brackets detract from the title in my opinion Rhythm, pattern and spacing : Well I'm no expert but there seem to be a few lines that could easily…" -
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- March 2012
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22 ThuFirst critique offered
on "GREY AREA" by @AmmaKonadu
- February 2012
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21 Tue
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19 SunFirst publication
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19 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
im 17 my name is Rachel i love poetry i write it at school home and most recently on trips to places.Once i get started writeing its hard to stop my mind keeps going and wondering and my hands keep writing.I actually use to hate writing but about 2 months ago i got into writing poetrty ive loved it ever since.
Location: omaha ne
Favorite Poets
hmm dont really have any although Edger Allen Poe is really good i love his whole dark out look. But i mostly like to read one written by people my age.
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