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LoVeMeNeVeRFoRgEtMe
Member since February 19, 2012
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cycles of a teenage heart break </3
how.......
how can you do this to me?
isnt it bad enough you hurt me?
i forget you for a moment
........ im happy
but now i cant stop crying and im
trying
whatever this is it sucks
i push and push you out of my mind
yet you find a way back in.
i tell you its ok and im fine
truth is im not im far from it.
i hate feeling this way
if i knew this would be so hard
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i would have stayd alone.
if i knew id fall for you this hard
i would have left it alone
but i didnt....
now im paying the price arnt i?
im waiting for this to end
will it ever?
i hope so because its too much
not being with you.
but i understand the choice you made
just wish things could change...
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- May 2012
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06 SunReceived a critique
on life<3 from @Cloudthings
"& always feel free to let advice that doesn't work for you, or feels condescending, just roll right off you, take the best from this place Rachel (& life) & use it to build what you already have so much of. I remember a…" -
06 SunReceived a critique
on comfort zone from @Cloudthings
"Hi R, thought I'd check out some of your other work... I think you most brave, I used to write at your age too, but never would have let anyone see my work. Good to see Cat here, & I'd second her advice, but don't give…" -
06 SunReceived a critique
on cycles of a teenage heart break </3 from @Cloudthings
"Hiya, had to read this since my teenage son is just going through what sounds very similar, & suddenly he wont talk to me about it. I think writing about it is really good. As a poem, it would appear it is definitely pr…" -
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- April 2012
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- March 2012
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22 Thu
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22 ThuFirst critique offered
on "GREY AREA" by @AmmaKonadu
- February 2012
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19 SunFirst publication
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19 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
im 17 my name is Rachel i love poetry i write it at school home and most recently on trips to places.Once i get started writeing its hard to stop my mind keeps going and wondering and my hands keep writing.I actually use to hate writing but about 2 months ago i got into writing poetrty ive loved it ever since.
Location: omaha ne
Favorite Poets
hmm dont really have any although Edger Allen Poe is really good i love his whole dark out look. But i mostly like to read one written by people my age.
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