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After the Bang: The Cosmic Room
Micro‑particles collide.
Bulb‑like nodes of parallel universes
unfold, raw and unconfined.
We step inside a room made of cosmos,
bold and unconstrained.
We trace every fixture our senses reach:
tables and chairs, window‑sashes,
beds, cabinets.
“This is my room. I am its master!”
“But it has never truly belonged to you …”
We take in every finish, every piece of furniture,
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its hues, its lingering scents.
Still —
Who built and furnished this room?
Why was it arranged this way?
Who granted us entry into this space?
Where do we come from, and where are we going?
Some sit quiet within that vast room,
untethered from worldly gain.
Carved in stillness, like The Thinker in stone.
Curiosity pulls them inward.
Their inner space stretches,
boundless as the cosmos itself.
loonflora’s timeline
- August 2026
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- July 2026
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31 Fri
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31 FriContest commendation
07/26 My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me
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31 FriFirst contest commendation
07/26 My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me
with the poem "My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me".
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29 WedCritiqued
"I am called by different names " by @Trouble
"It’s lovely to meet you, Pressley. I’m glad my comment resonated with you. I look forward to seeing your revised poem soon, and I’m happy to share my writing with you too." -
29 WedReceived a critique
on My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me from @Trouble
"amazing poem I have to say as I am getting older so is my memory I struggle with all dates numbers etc. the beauty of your poem was the blinding of technology as a tool that you can rely upon ( basically if it wasn't fo…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"I appreciate your interest. I would love to explore turning one of your poems or mine into a song. My process is to study the emotion and message of the poem, create a suitable melody and arrangement, then produce a fin…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"okay I enjoy discussing creativity with you. I was thinking your poem has a strong emotional story that could work beautifully as a song. If you ever want to explore that idea, we can talk about it." -
29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"okay no problem, or can you share me your gmail that will be more better" -
29 WedNew follower
@Bellasmith
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29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"thank you so much, i will message you inbox now, so we can share something meaningful together, or did you like we should continue here" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"thank you so much, i will message you inbox now, so we can share something meaningful together, or did you like we should continue here" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on An Interview With Bad Luck from @Bellasmith
"I really enjoyed the way you personified Bad Luck and turned it into something to be questioned rather than simply feared. The line about pausing to look into its eyes and seeing your own nature reflected back was espec…" -
29 Wed
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29 WedCritiqued
"I am called by different names " by @Trouble
"Written from a creator’s perspective overlooking the world, this poem witnesses humanity’s destruction of nature, endless wars and the gradual fading of morality, examining humanity’s current state of existence. It carr…" -
29 WedFirst critique offered
on "I am called by different names " by @Trouble
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28 TuePosted a poem
My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me
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27 Mon
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26 SunFirst publication
Both Abstract and Tangible
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26 Sun
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26 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 WedHighest posting month
July 2026 — 5 poems
About Me
About me
当代自由诗作家。我的诗歌平衡了物理、自然的细节和内省的哲学。
Location: CHN
Recent Work
After the Bang: The Cosmic Room
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World Annals
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An Interview With Bad Luck
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Things My Alarm Clock Would Say
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Both Abstract and Tangible
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me | 07/26 My Passwords Are Plotting Against Me | 1 July, 2026 – 31 July, 2026 |
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