Loki

Member since December 27, 2022

Member for 3 years, 5 months

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H#10

Posted Jan 1, 2023 · 3 lines · 6 critiques

Pools of liquid sky
left behind by idle seas,
gather in the kelp.

Loki’s timeline

December 2023
27 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2023
02 Mon

Received a critique
on H#10 from @Lavender
"Hello, Loki, Your haiku poems have all been beautiful, but I especially like the gentle quiet in this piece. I don't believe the comma is necessary, unless you have a specific intent? Lovely! L"
02 Mon

Received a critique
on H#10 from @Geezer
"My signature appears the same for all my comments and critique. It should not be percieved as a comment on your work. I mean it for those who when criticised about style, form or other things make the statement of "I wr…"
02 Mon

Received a critique
on H#10 from @Geezer
"the sky mirrored in the slack water between the kelp decorated swells! Very good Haiku. Peaceful and smooth. ~ Geezer. ."
01 Sun

Posted a poem
H#10
"Pools of liquid sky"
Open thread 3 lines
December 2022
31 Sat

Received a critique
on H#9 from @RoseBlack
"I can see the afterglow of a storm against the sea so clearly. Wonderful job."
31 Sat

Received a critique
on H#9 from @Lavender
"on your post, Obi, but is this haiku about a bit of traditional folklore? I am intrigued! :) L"
31 Sat

Received a critique
on H#9 from @Lavender
"Hello, Loki, You capture the scene in motion. I especially like the word "invites." Thank you! L"
31 Sat

Received a critique
on H#9 from @Obadiah Grey
"New Years eve a black dog at the door."
31 Sat

Posted a poem
H#9
"A sea, brimmed with storm,"
Open thread 3 lines
30 Fri

Received a critique
on Haiku#4 from @Jackweb
"Lovely! Apt yet beautiful! That's what makes haiku a great one! A few words that has a great interpretation surrounded it. Nice one! ."
30 Fri

Posted a poem
Haiku #6
"A low sun watches"
Open thread 3 lines
27 Tue

First publication
Haiku#4
27 Tue

Posted a poem
Haiku#4
"Water boatmen;"
Open thread 3 lines
27 Tue

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Poet. Favorite subjects 'human foibles' and nature. Fond of Haiku and Senryu form. The more brevity the more interest.

Location: Cornwall, GBR

Favorite Poets

Issa

Dylan Thomas

Boris Pasternak.

Recent Work

H#10

Posted: 1 January, 2023

H#9

Posted: 31 December, 2022

Haiku #6

Posted: 30 December, 2022

Haiku#4

Posted: 27 December, 2022

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Loki

H#10

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One year of membership

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on H#10 from @Geezer

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H#10

on H#9 from @RoseBlack

on H#9 from @Lavender

on H#9 from @Lavender

on H#9 from @Obadiah Grey

H#9

on Haiku#4 from @Jackweb

Haiku #6

Haiku#4

Haiku#4

Membership begins

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H#10

H#9

Haiku #6

Haiku#4

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