H#9

A sea, brimmed with storm,
invites the streeting clouds to
spill light in its waves.

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

Region, Country: Cornwall, GBR

Favorite Poets: Issa, Dylan Thomas, Boris Pasternak.

3 years 3 months ago

New Years eve
a black dog
at the door.

3 years 3 months ago

on your post, Obi, but is this haiku about a bit of traditional folklore?
I am intrigued! :)
L

3 years 3 months ago

3 years 3 months ago

Hello, Loki,
You capture the scene in motion. I especially like the word "invites."
Thank you!
L

3 years 3 months ago

I can see the afterglow of a storm against the sea so clearly. Wonderful job.

3 years 3 months ago

You did that.....I just offered you a spring board.