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Lindame
Member since June 6, 2020
Member for 5 years, 11 months
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Speaking of Eve
Her voice is like velvet petals
Hidden amongst the lilies,
Wearing her heart on her face
Held in tranquil hands grace,
Red birds welcome her presence
As the snake of eloquence
Guides her to burn to write
In spite of the elements of night.
Lindame’s timeline
- June 2025
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06 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2021
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06 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2021
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15 Mon
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15 Mon
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14 SunReceived a critique
on Speaking of Eve from @Michael Anthony
"Hi Lindame, I enjoyed this! The two stanzas could easily stand separately on their own as poems. I especially liked: "As the snake of eloquence guides her to burn to write." - wonderful. I also liked the brevity here -…" -
14 SunCritiqued
"EARTH" by @scribbler
"Nice ring of Amergins poem "The Song of Amergin". Bravo! I love the unending ending!!!" -
14 Sun
- August 2020
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16 SunReceived a critique
on Why My Poetry Sucks (Title prompt) from @lovedly
"The word suck like fuck gives to all humans a pleasure in equal measure your suck is a new feather only gives you a different measure be at it as you may be happy not gay In life most suck all their way enjoy different…" -
14 FriReceived a critique
on Pinned from @Candlewitch
"this flows nicely and I love the play on words! I'm enjoying your poetry. *hugs, Cat -" -
14 FriReceived a critique
on Why My Poetry Sucks (Title prompt) from @Candlewitch
"I think I know how you feel. good work! *hugs, Cat -" - July 2020
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15 WedReceived a critique
on Why My Poetry Sucks (Title prompt) from @Dramen85
"For me when I write a poem I eventually hear a rhythm in my head for it. Once I do, I find words to attach to the beats. I tend to write longer poems, and that's probably why. Every poet is different though, my dad and…" -
15 WedCritiqued
"Impression (August contest)" by @tyro
"Lovely scene, would love to visit such a place! Nice!! Worth many reads indeed." -
15 Wed
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15 Wed
- June 2020
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28 Sun
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28 Sun
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27 SatCritiqued
"Lovely Seeds Any Takers" by @lovedly
"Right off the bat... the all caps... big no no in my book. You're shouting your poetry at me! Not really polite in online reading forums etc.. Not sure I get what you're actually talking about. I just simply cannot foll…" -
26 Fri
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07 SunCritiqued
"Leaf and Tree" by @coosh1
"The Two Trees, by Yeats, is one of my favorite poems of all time. I do believe they have feelings they cannot speak of, so they move slowly to tell their story. I love your poem! All living things feel, no less the love…" -
07 SunFirst critique offered
on "Leaf and Tree" (since unpublished) by @coosh1
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06 SatFirst publication
Lindame
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06 Sat
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06 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Artist, poet, and Mum.
Location: USA, ZZB
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