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Jun 06, 2020
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Lindame
Opals strung nightly
Across evenings jet skies,
Sparkles of her voice.
— Lindame, Jun 06, 2020
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Haiku form
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Critiques
Rula
5 years 12 months ago
Hello Lindame
and a warm welcome to Neopoet.
A very fine haiku to start with. It has a wonderful imagery.
You've done great with just few words which is not always easy.
Looking for more of your works.
Lindame
5 years 12 months ago
Hi
Thanks for the welcome. I love haiku. Been writing for many years learning forms etc.. I prefer concise poetry, it's more my style I think.
Lindame
5 years 12 months ago
Nice
Ahahaa thanks a lot Muse!
Gracy
5 years 12 months ago
Hi Lindame and welcome to
Hi Lindame and welcome to Neopoets. Lovely haiku, the images are perfect. Don't you mean "evening's"? Just a small nit.
All the best, Gracy
Geezer
5 years 11 months ago
I like Haiku...
and this fits the traditional style, Very nice and strong solid thought.
~ Geezer.
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