Laura

Member since September 3, 2017

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Jesus, Brighter Than All

Posted Jan 18, 2018 · 10 lines · 31 critiques

Brighter than all the stars in the sky
Shining together to form galaxies
Brighter than anything on this earth
Brighter than anything I've seen
Shining to illuminate ways for me
Revealing the wonders within them
Your power works to glorify Jesus
Showing the way and helping to follow
The wonder and glory that I have in you

By: Leona Chaput

Laura’s timeline

September 2022
03 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2018
03 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
February 2018
12 Mon

New follower
@chevyvent
12 Mon

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @chevyvent
"Poetically speaking God is the greatest of all time hands down. As he seeks to weave his love on a blank canvas of pure beauty. People today don't need to hear a sermon they just need your presence. They probably will n…"
January 2018
31 Wed

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @weirdelf
"To put all this in context note that Laura posted 3 poems 3 months ago, all of which received helpful, non-attacking feedback. She gave no responses and has given no feedback to anyone else. Then a week ago she posted t…"
30 Tue

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @Simon
"that i 've experienced this kind of arguments,everybody believe in his or her Lord and I think we all have right to praise him, for me I see no reason attacking the author of that poem or each other with words."
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @weirdelf
"some things you should be aware of, regarding Laura, to put all this in context. 3 months ago Kelsey gave her excellent, helpful feedback, Jane, Mark and I gave fair feedback, without attack and Laura has not responded…"
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @weirdelf
"I'm just saying it's bullshit. And I have every right to."
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @Eumolpus
"Most lyrics have little poetic dimension if you think of it- Bob Marely, Irving Berlin, you name it. Its simple messages, simple stories, boogie oogie oogie, We are are world or Jesus contemporary. As I've stated about…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @scribbler
"Some of the most beautiful poetry I've read was religion based. The first example which comes to mind is the 23rd psalm. Now onward to your poem. I think it could be improved fairly easily. I will post it here with a fe…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Jesus, Brighter Than All from @scribbler
"You sat atheists never proselytize yet here you are condemning somebody's religion simple because it isn't your own...tsk,tsk....."
18 Thu

Most-discussed work
Jesus, Brighter Than All

31 critiques to date.
18 Thu

Posted a poem
Jesus, Brighter Than All
"Brighter than all the stars in the sky"
Open thread 10 lines
October 2017
29 Sun

Posted a poem
Walking In Glory
"With Jesus beside me"
Open thread 9 lines
22 Sun

Posted a poem
Humbled Before Him
"My God is so awesome, majestic"
Open thread 13 lines
21 Sat

Posted a poem
Wonderful Love
"Wonderful love, love overwhelming"
Open thread 8 lines
September 2017
03 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
October 2008
27 Mon

First publication
It breaks my heart to see you!
27 Mon

Posted a poem
It breaks my heart to see you!
"It breaks my heart to see you as often when we meet                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Your talking utter rubbish and unsteady on your feet                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          We verbaly attack you telling you your wrong                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      We hope that you will stop this and try to be strong                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     You think that we don't love you                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           We loath you for our gain                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          You cannot see our anger stems from our pain                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          It breaks my heart to see you and what you have become                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Society thinks our  Jamie little more than scum                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        In and out of prison nowhere to live only a capacity for taking with nothing to give                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           My son you are dying and I can do no more                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         The answer lies within you only you have your cure !                                                                                                                                                                                                            "
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