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Laura Pariani
Member since July 19, 2026
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Broken
Broken promises.
Broken dreams.
Trust broken into pieces.
You left when you said you never would.
I still will always feel the way it used to be.
Pain is all I feel now.
Pain is what all is left.
I loved you then and I still do.
I still think of you.
Think of what might have been.
Things that were never said.
I close my eyes and I see you again.
Nothing will be the same.
I am all to blame for all that could have been.
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You are but a dream.
Laura Pariani’s timeline
- July 2026
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19 SunCritiqued
"Your Dad Still Texts Me" by @Dcoups
"I can really relate to this, and it brought back the tears in a flood. Very well written, and I had to until the end." -
19 SunCritiqued
"The Soul Stealer." by @Alex Tanner
"I loved the title, which caught my eye completely. I couldn't stop reading it, and then when the poem ended it was overwhelming. Thank you for sharing." -
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on "The Soul Stealer." by @Alex Tanner
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About Me
About me
I am a retired grandmother, and I am 70 years old. I was born in San Francisco, CA.
I love to write poetry, so I can keep my mind busy.
Location: USA
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