KINGZOMBIE

Member since September 20, 2009

Member for 16 years, 8 months

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"Her Smile Reborn" erotic content

Posted May 8, 2011 · 26 lines · 7 critiques

A warm breeze,
caresses her body,
touching all,
in places seldom seen.

Eyes closed,
capturing fantasy,
hands follow,
the path of lovers,
leaving fingers wet.

Baring all,
teeth clinched,
her breath stolen,
as hands remember,
forgotten ecstasies.

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A pleasure reborn,
in erotic moments,
her form quivers,
sweat beads her brow.

Freedom in silence,
now broken,
primal screams,
nails tear skin.

Climax begins,
rippling in waves,
just under flesh,
as her smile is born.

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September 2024
19 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
September 2019
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Anniversary
10 years of membership
September 2014
19 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2011
19 Thu

Received a critique
on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Candlewitch
"Where are you? Are you alright? You are missed! always, Cat"
09 Mon

Received a critique
on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @raj
"this is sensually exotic and erotically powerful write without an iota of perversion...great job..."
09 Mon

Received a critique
on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Candlewitch
"Indeed you have done the female view point justice! erotic and sensual without being crude or vulgar. I especially love these lines: A warm breeze, caresses her body, touching all, in places seldom seen. Eyes closed, ca…"
09 Mon

Received a critique
on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Arrow
"if writing the female perspective, it would help to write as the female (e.g., "I", "my" vs. "her"). I still get the sense of a man looking at and thinking about a woman rather than a woman experiencing. Obviously, ther…"
08 Sun

Received a critique
on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @judyanne
"had to read this with my hands over my eyes lol great write..... tasteful - just..... but extremely good descriptive love judy"
08 Sun

Posted a poem
"Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content*
"A warm breeze,"
Open thread 26 lines
05 Thu

Received a critique
on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Janice Pearce
"I enjoyed this one from you, the fifth line" obsolete dreams gone" does throw me a bit, just my opinion :)"
05 Thu

Received a critique
on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Candlewitch
"This poem flows with a natural grace and ease. My favorite lines are: Once forgotten, time holds no meaning. Beyond our reality, into tomorrows breath. and once we are forgotten, we exist no more. One of the reasons to…"
05 Thu

Received a critique
on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Geezer
"fooled me! This looks like you are very comfortable with free verse. Excellent work, my friend! I really enjoyed this, and got a lot of emotion from it, which is why we write. ~ Gee"
05 Thu

Posted a poem
"Tomorrows Breath"
"Plastic feelings,"
Open thread 12 lines
02 Mon

New follower
@lou
April 2011
28 Thu

Critiqued
"Stitch" by @Hooded Stranger
"I think you have a hit here, I could also hear the beat even though there is no music yet.Also my favorite lines are the same as Cats, gonna be an awesome song:-)"
27 Wed

Critiqued
"The nectar of the gods --edit" by @Geremia
"I think there is a lot of truth in this write.However I did see a few misspellings in it, I'm sure they are just typos (become and living), they kind of messed it up a little for me."
27 Wed

Critiqued
"ARLINGTON" by @scribbler
"Very powerful post, the environment only made stronger by the few words used.I found myself at the end after the word "lost" having one last word enter my mind, "waste".This automatically brought back memories of the la…"
26 Tue

Critiqued
"DREADING SUMMER " by @scribbler
"A lot of southerners that I talk to consider Maryland a northern state(and yes I've even been called a "Yankee" before, lol).But Maryland use to be known as the jewel of the south.Strange how things change with time, lo…"
26 Tue

Critiqued
"Haiku" by @Race_9togo
""Painful but coldly beautiful in its relentlessness." Couldn't have said it better myself, so I didn't, lol.Great post Jim."
26 Tue

Critiqued
"sixes and sevens" by @ephraimcrud
"What playground you must have in your mind, I loved it, thanks for the laugh too, lol"
26 Tue

Posted a poem
"A Return to Eden"
"Stained filthy brick,"
Open thread 28 lines
25 Mon

Critiqued
"Dumb F#&*..." by @Geezer
"LMAO !!!! @ HS, sooooo true brother, lol."
25 Mon

Critiqued
"His Resting Chair" by @magics02
"I felt your loss through your words, and you have my belated condolences.I was also wondering about that code at the top of the post too.Once again Mona, this is a wonderful tribute and I'm sure your uncle is quite prou…"
25 Mon

Posted a poem
"Late Autumn Air"
"Skeletal fingers,"
Open thread 28 lines
21 Thu

Posted a poem
"All but a Lie"
"Lay down your head my love,"
Open thread 32 lines
06 Wed

Posted a poem
"After You Touch"
"Think of the future,"
Open thread 20 lines
March 2011
27 Sun

Posted a poem
"A Feeling of Dread"
"This empty feeling comes and it goes,"
Open thread 18 lines
17 Thu

Posted a poem
"Child Turned Whore"
"It hides within shadows,"
Open thread 23 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
March 2011 — 10 poems
12 Sat

Posted a poem
"This Grave that I Walk Upon"
"I stand upon this unmarked grave,"
Open thread 17 lines
10 Thu

Posted a poem
"Tortured"
"Crimson puddles in a gash,"
Open thread 19 lines
09 Wed

Posted a poem
"Humanity Fall"
"Sons of the planets collide with the sky,"
Open thread 14 lines
06 Sun

Posted a poem
"One Dark Night"
"A beautiful woman"
Open thread 14 lines
02 Wed

New follower
@loved
February 2011
27 Sun

New follower
@Hooded Stranger
23 Wed

Most-discussed work
"Kill Me Softly"

21 critiques to date.
September 2010
19 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2009
23 Wed

First critique offered
on "Love Match From Hell" (since unpublished) by @greeneyes
20 Sun

First publication
"ONE DARK NIGHT"vol.1
19 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I am 34 and tend to write about the darker things in life and of all the things that go bump in the night.My influences come from writers long gone and some current ones also.Music tends to inspire me, but most of my inspiration comes from my beautiful girlfriend Annastatia who never fails to give me new ideas.

"I want something good to die for, to make it beautiful to live"

Location: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets

I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also

for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium

it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it

lol.

" I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp

Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god

Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality

Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove

baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room

the bullgod has your head

and baby thats just fine

now it is time

we became the mighty cell

wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove

they say we've got a lifetime

but we know that ain't true

I will not be denied

baby

the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there

arms up overhead

a goddess in the ancient song

work that mighty world to the mindless groove

they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true

I will not be denied

they say weve got a lifetime

but we know that ain't true

I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Contest Wins

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15 years of membership

10 years of membership

5 years of membership

on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Candlewitch

on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @raj

on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Candlewitch

on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @Arrow

on "Her Smile Reborn" *erotic content* from @judyanne

on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Janice Pearce

on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Candlewitch

on "Tomorrows Breath" from @Geezer

"Stitch" by @Hooded Stranger

"The nectar of the gods --edit" by @Geremia

"ARLINGTON" by @scribbler

"DREADING SUMMER " by @scribbler

"Haiku" by @Race_9togo

"sixes and sevens" by @ephraimcrud

"Dumb F#&*..." by @Geezer

"His Resting Chair" by @magics02

March 2011 — 10 poems

One year of membership

on "Love Match From Hell" (since unpublished) by @greeneyes

Membership begins

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on "Her Smile Reborn" erotic content from @Candlewitch

on "Her Smile Reborn" erotic content from @raj

on "Her Smile Reborn" erotic content from @Candlewitch

on "Her Smile Reborn" erotic content from @Arrow

on "Her Smile Reborn" erotic content from @judyanne