"ONE DARK NIGHT"vol.1

A beautiful woman stands nude in the moonlight, a candle flickers as a breeze whispers through the bedroom.She stands in the corner sweat glistens on her perfectly formed torso, tear's streak her face as blood drips from a knife to the cold stone floor.A puddle gathers at her feet staining what little innocence still remained.She stands listening as if she can still hear her dead lover's breathing.She lightly whimper's to herself, why?

— KINGZOMBIE, Sep 20, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets: I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also, for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium, it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it, lol., " I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp, Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god, Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality, Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove, baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room, the bullgod has your head, and baby thats just fine, now it is time, we became the mighty cell, wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove, they say we've got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, baby, the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there, arms up overhead, a goddess in the ancient song, work that mighty world to the mindless groove, they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, they say weve got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

tingling story... love, it. Just one small thing, there should be a space between the comma and the following word. Keep writing. Always, Cat