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kelsey
Member since April 1, 2010
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MY FILIAL PIETY
MY FILIAL PIETY
And it behooves on every sincerely thinking filial
To respect whosoever for a day shall be added unto our days
Perhaps as we could strongly adscitate
On the fact that what an experience face saw;
Can never be seeing ordinarily even if takes to air
And so I am a young knave whose mind is free and docile
I could sail above the ocean firth and descend beside of you
Because you have all it takes to be one
Even when nothing really has to add up to anything
I choose to call you mother because I see mother in you
You are like a god of whom our filial piety is due to
And also like one of the sibylline whom we need to decide on us
In fact you are all we live to remember by the words, encouragement?
Love from kelechi to you Ma Norway
You are a great woman
I DEDICATE THIS PIECE TO MA ' ANN HARVEY.
kelsey’s timeline
- March 2025
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31 MonAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2020
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31 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2015
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31 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2011
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31 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2010
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26 FriNew follower
@loved
- July 2010
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17 SatCritiqued
"Stationary Dance" by @Beauregard
"your thought is quiet clear and heard I mean the expression is perfectly pass I like it." - June 2010
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22 TueReceived a critique
on MY FILIAL PIETY from @Nordic cloud
"Ann of Norway I wonder what this means, I think you shouldn't use words too difficult for us to understand it gives no extra prestige to see difficult words when you do not master the language yet so well, stay simple i…" -
22 TueReceived a critique
on MY FILIAL PIETY from @Beauregard
"I know she will enjoy it, Kelechi. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe" -
21 Mon
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18 FriCritiqued
"TOPSY TURVY WORLD" by @Nordic cloud
"I do appreciate Ma, i ll always keep in touch and stay out of trouble knowing you could as well advice me not to do?" -
17 ThuReceived a critique
on Life medley and maffled from @Nordic cloud
"Ann of Norway Wonderfully absurd have you read any nonsense rhymes? You would like them if you are having us on with your words, we cannot take them seriously as phrases that make good sense and are left wondering. You…" -
17 ThuReceived a critique
on FOR THIS TURN from @Nordic cloud
"Ann of Norway I too know only some of the words you have stamped out here for us to read, as a sound poem, somewhat like the beginnings of such that Gerard Manley Hopkins used as an Avant Gard type of poetry, it has its…" -
16 WedCritiqued
"A Token Of A Dream" by @Calliope
"our love is caught always around the corner searching for who to victimize and they say such is love, as it was when you were delight." -
16 WedCritiqued
"TOPSY TURVY WORLD" by @Nordic cloud
"It's a great feeling ma having you around and thanks for admiring the face behind myself-hood." -
16 WedCritiqued
"In a Saffron Glow" by @Seren
"Hi seren i simply don't know how you got me reading, well done." -
14 MonCritiqued
"Taste of real life, bagels and chocolate" by @professor
"Is quiet profound and absorbing when little attention is paid am loving it here my prof." -
14 Mon
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14 MonCritiqued
"Five star whore's" by @DawningDaytripper
"you know it thrills when you are certain with what you actually deed i must say am happy with you ok well pen my friend." -
14 MonFirst critique offered
on "Stationary Dance" by @Beauregard
- May 2010
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15 Sat
- April 2010
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24 SatReceived a critique
on Life medley and maffled from @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"Hello poet. Please understand I have only read this work a single time yet this is my take of it. A statment made to a person or a God. A plead to understand what you had said in the past. No I will not come at your bec…" -
16 FriFirst publication
Life medley and maffled
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16 FriPosted a poem
Life medley and maffled
" How may i keep a calm sough" - March 2010
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31 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 16 days later.
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