In a Saffron Glow

I think I might have to just live with my comp. strapped to my chest or something. I can't leave you guy's unread for a day, without coming back to find such wonderful work from you. And you know I have to comment. I don't know how to find the time to do anything else lately. " Searching the sky, her face tilts the sun, lighting the world, our beacon of one." I wish that I could have written those words about my wife, she is my beacon. Sometimes I am ashamed of the paltry offerings I serve her. The only thing that keeps me writing for her, is that it comes from my heart and I think she sees that. " A comfort in words, the jarring ones too, she makes my day, this is never more true." Such recognition of the days I spend with her! Thank you for the beautiful write, L & Hugz, Gee.

You have become such a fine poet... I have no idea who this is for, but it is really quite beautiful... enjoyed it immensely! I do hope she reads it and is as warmed as I was in the reading. Richard

This is truly beautiful, from a wonderful soul and radiant heart. Of all the poets here, you are one of the best. Always loving and giving. Keep up the great work. My favorite lines are: Fighting with right by her side, making her way through belief in rhyme A saffron wake she leaves behind, to follow her message merging heart into mind A Comfort in words the jarring ones too, she makes my day this is never more true Always, Cat

but never your spirit! It outshines you! Beautiful piece Lady Jayne! One tiny change perhaps to (a butterfly's touch!)singular Right? see what you think! Cheers Boni

It's so funny how you make me smile,as soon as I start reading your poem. I get this impish, little smirk on my face, and I'm lost in a hovel, of emotions,dancing on these words that lift my soul to inspiration. Lovely Lynn. John. Mantiscepter

Jayne, As always you have me in awe, this is for all your new stuff! I just love reading everything you write. You amaze me. Love, Elizabeth

this is a great write and all of you must have computers strapped to your chests lol. you are such a sweety jayne never change dear. loves -diatom shells blowing you a kiss

what can i say other than....shibby shibby cocoanut ♣

Another tear. I love it. as boss says, shibby, shibby or was that nanoo nanoo. Mork. It is very beautiful. Well done. What more can I say, plenty, but mostly, its really, lovely. Lyz xxx

I loved your poem. Very few of us have written poems on behalf of the purity of friendship. Yours is exceptionally great! Thanks for sharing, Your friend, Hugo

Delighted to see you in spotlight ...well deserved

and flow ,I really like this one jayne, can find no fault here ,really beautiful. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

Jayne This beautiful delicate lace webb you have spun full of colour and tenderness. This is me every word touched my heart and soul amazing Electric Blue

Sweet green-eyed Jayne (l/2) ;-) That we must write is a fact of life.. that we can and do share friendship, love and kindness, is a gift, wrapped in saffron ribbon. Thank you for yours, were that I lived in your neighborhood to share real hugs and tears. ~A

We are all vagabonds on this landscape of life, meeting one another is one of the joys we share thanks to the internet gods, and to Neopoet's Founders. ;-) Love always, Anna

This is beautiful, but I loved it then and I love it now. Thank you dearheart. I see fucktard is still here, lol. This here Nana Lyz is quite pleased with your kind words, and yes, all the above comments have said it before but now they must come and see again. I am proud to have you as a friend and I cant wait to see you. I am still sick, I blame the kids, lol. When I had cancer, my immunities dropped, so when I catch anything it takes longer to get better and I seem to get things worse, diabetes does not help, you dont heal as quick, but it has one advantage, I can check out my poem when ever I want, lol, I wont be running the streets like I would like, lol. I hope you are resting and when I feel a bit better, I will be back with bells on. Thank you darlin and heaps of hugs and kisses to Aunty Jayne, Love from Nana Lyz.XX He He. Love the sentiment, you cheeky girl. LMAO at you grinning, lol.

Yeah, ears, nose, and throat, hate it. With my asthma I am awake all night with the coughing so of a day I have been trying to get some energy back, I have too much to do and it is pissing me off not having the energy, yes, I too am on diet but with tablets, supposed to be on the needle but I declined nicely. Lol, ask Jade I fight all the time with my Dr.I told him once with all the money they get they should have a miracle pill to fix everything by now and I want to know how come they dont get sick, rarely, lol. That formula you are on, mum and my uncle had that, I agree it is filthy, like that sustagen stuff, gross. And what surprise? You gonna be naughty? If you seen my house at the mo, you would cringe, lol, and what I have for you is here somewhere, Jade was supposed to take it to you, lol. I still have to find my aunts xmas present, lol, I know it is here somewhere, never mind I will get there. Love my poem and I thank you for it. You take care missy moo. Love to all and catch you on a poem else where, lol. Love Lyz, XX.

Hi seren i simply don't know how you got me reading, well done.