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joesgirl21612
Member since June 12, 2012
Member for 13 years, 11 months
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love shines
When you look at me like that what do you see? I don't get how perfect you could love plain old me.
But you've been there for me rose and thorn. only you can fix me when my worlds been torn.
you love me now and you'll love me then. if this is what love feels like i don't want it to end.
you complete me and make me whole. you're like a a favorite song that never gets old.
your love is a whole new experience for me. every time i see you i can eel my heart beat.
and somewhere deep in side me I've always know that all that shines doesn't have to be gold.
your love shines bright just like the sun. and from now until forever you're my number one!
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- June 2012
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16 SatReceived a critique
on love shines from @loved
"has advised .. but then it is your maiden poem here. Also the end is not quite right, if I may say so..... when you beseech for a lover who shall be for ever, yet in the bubbling youth of life, you wish to have another…" -
15 FriReceived a critique
on love shines from @China Blue
"it would help the reader immensely if you were to break this into stanzas otherwise it is like reading one long run on sentence even with the punctuations why do you ask for the raw truth if you are not actively editing" -
12 TuePosted a poem
love shines
"When you look at me like that what do you see? I don't get how perfect you could love plain old me." -
12 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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12 MonReceived a critique
on love shines from @magics02
"Hello and welcome here. I was just reading this and would like to give my feedback of it. This is a nice poem but needs some much needed work. Let me give you just a little example if I may since you ask for truth this…" -
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- June 2010
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22 TueFirst publication
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About Me
About me
hi, my name is rebecca. i am a senoir at a career center where i take culinary arts. i have an older brother and sister who both have a little boy. i love my nephews to death (: i have 2 dogs and a turtle named michael angelo... if you would like to know more please ask!
Location: ohio, USA
Favorite Poets
Robert Frost
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| Rhyme Crimes | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2012-06-01 | Concluded |