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Jun 22, 2010
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ForgottenThere once was a butterfly that sat upon a leafShe made all the children laugh, even when they were asleep. The children were all playing, laughing and having funWhen they spotted a rose, a very pretty one The children all came they talked and they staredAnd looked past that rose then discovered many roses there Many months later, one warm autumn dayI was sitting behind a fence watching the children play From behind that fence I could hear allThe children singing songs about roses so dear I remember a time it was me they would sing aboutBut those times were long forgotten and so was I no doubt Hopefully later on maybe sometime in NovemberThose cheerful days we shared would soon be remembered
— joesgirl21612, Jun 22, 2010
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