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jane210660
Member since May 8, 2016
Member for 10 years
Balance of Power - Ode to the cellphone March contest
Shiny, streamlined smart
phone, tap, tap, tap.
Tiny, morse messengers, summon
our silicon gods.
Didn’t you know, the world is flat
and reduced
to the palm of a hand?
We have such power.
Sleek, sexy smart
phone, tap, tap, tap.
Hand held, caressed.
Obsessed
we worship
our sugar coated tablet,
which holds such power.
jane210660’s timeline
- May 2026
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08 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2021
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08 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2018
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31 Thu
- April 2018
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09 MonReceived a critique
on Balance of Power - Ode to the cellphone March contest from @weirdelf
"Dig it and well earned, remember to click on the highlighted word 'congrats' when you see it on Facebook, it's fun." -
05 ThuContest commendation
Ode To The Cellphone [March contest]
with "Balance of Power - Ode to the cellphone March contest".
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05 ThuFirst contest commendation
Ode To The Cellphone [March contest]
with the poem "Balance of Power - Ode to the cellphone March contest".
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02 MonReceived a critique
on Balance of Power - Ode to the cellphone March contest from @raj
"for being a worthy winner of the March Contest. Keep smiling.. ..........................." - March 2018
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07 Wed
- October 2017
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22 Sun
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18 Wed
- August 2017
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21 MonCritique milestone
1,000 critiques given
- May 2017
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08 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2016
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17 Tue
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15 SunHighest posting month
May 2016 — 9 poems
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08 SunFirst critique offered
on "SNIPPET" by @scribbler
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08 SunFirst publication
Night Works
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08 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Well, there's not much to say really........................... cue hours of drivel about living in the countryside, communing with nature, being a free spirit et al.
I like writing and have a healthy degree of cynicism about the world in general, yet still manage to maintain a love for my fellow mankind (well most of them).
Oh and I like wine!
Location: Yorkshire England, GBR
Recent Work
Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.
Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| Poets first poems | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2017-06-23 | Concluded |
| IMAGERY IN POETRY( ready to start?) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2017-06-24 | Concluded |
| Meter... The Workshop. | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2017-04-29 | Concluded |
| Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal) | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2012-09-29 | Concluded |