J-poe1234

Member since June 14, 2026

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I miss

Posted Jun 25, 2026 · 28 lines · 1 critiques

I miss the old me,

the one without cuts

all over her body.

I miss the old me,

the faithless.

The one who didn't know God

so she couldn't feel worthless.

And I hate the new me

because she always says,

"Just BLEED!"

and

"Go ahead and bury me!"

And I think I know exactly

what she means,

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because if this is your love,

then I hope one day you
hate me.

I hope one day you hate me.

Maybe then I could

rise

from

this

grave

you

nailed

shut

out of

L O V E!!

J-poe1234’s timeline

June 2026
25 Thu

Posted a poem
I miss
"I miss the old me,"
Open thread 28 lines
20 Sat

Received a critique
on Younger me Arguing from @davidgambro31
"Hey J. I gotta say man, I really like what you have here. The title jumped out at me while scrolling through so I'd say it's doing what a good title is supposed to do. Your language use was what made this poem really wo…"
19 Fri

Posted a poem
Younger me Arguing
"There are cuts"
Open thread 137 lines
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Blueprints to a Bleeding Heart from @Geezer
"I see too many "buts, " I think that you could come up with a different way to say but. BOMBS You can run from shadows, and they'll never stop chasing you. You can draw your pictures of broken, tattered hearts, dripping…"
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Blueprints to a Bleeding Heart from @Marina M
"It's hard for me to read deeply into stuff sometimes because of physical pain, I have trouble focusing. I had always been looking for something that helps me visualize and process things. This is one of those that just…"
18 Thu

Critiqued
"Retro " by @tgaz
"Love the first line, it truly is kinda cool. Like a raindrop is natural, and so for it to be mathematical at the same time is kinda jarring. You're also really good at imagery. I do think it's a bit choppy, so you might…"
18 Thu

Posted a poem
Blueprints to a Bleeding Heart
"Some people say that tears are beautiful,"
Open thread 37 lines
17 Wed

Critiqued
"The doom gesture" by @tgaz
"No problem, i'm new here too so i thought i should support you"
17 Wed

Critiqued
"The doom gesture" by @tgaz
"was very good, it made it seem like someone was chasing a dream, with growing obssesion and the dream was impossible to achieve. it really makes the reader think, it took me a while to understadn btu it made me think ha…"
17 Wed

Received a critique
on Canvas from @davidgambro31
"This is pretty solid for a first draft. I imagine you're telling us about a ghost that isn't ready to depart for the afterlife and is maybe wrestling with all these emotions he feels—represented by the different colors…"
16 Tue

Posted a poem
Canvas
"A wispy last breath"
Open thread 22 lines
15 Mon

Posted a poem
The Greatest
"I'm the greatest"
Open thread 36 lines
15 Mon

Received a critique
on Count Slowly from @Geezer
"with the AI, go back to letting the reader see the scene, the disembodiment of your ghosts, the prophesy of becoming "normal". ~ Geezer."
15 Mon

New follower
@tgaz
15 Mon

Critiqued
"Sometimes" by @patrysw3
"I like the concept, and some of your rhymes are really good, but some of them sound a bit forced as well. If you can't find a perfect rhyme, try to use a slant rhyme; it makes the poem flow better. (the ending and like…"
15 Mon

First critique offered
on "Sometimes" by @patrysw3
15 Mon

First publication
Count Slowly
15 Mon

Posted a poem
Count Slowly
"I’m 14"
Open thread 54 lines
15 Mon

Highest posting month
June 2026 — 6 poems
14 Sun

Joined Neopoet
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