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Fatsani Chione
Member since May 15, 2022
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Honest
Wrong place if heaven is what you seek,
My heart’s a total wreck whose pieces still I am trying to pick,
Most of the time depression is the only friend I have,
And she is, besides you, a lady I truly love,
Might be unfair to you but I loved her first,
Like a come and go guest she never really left,
I knew her first when heavens smiled upon my mother,
I met her again when my first lover loved some other,
See, she might have kept me sad but I learnt to love her
I love you and in time I hope I will love you than I love her
If you stay know you this, I am an art yet to be perfected
Yet with all my flaws and all I will never let you feel neglected.
Fatsani Chione’s timeline
- January 2024
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12 FriReceived a critique
on We Are from @Candlewitch
"I like to take the poem's meaning to be that religion especially Christian, is as Geezer said; The Bane of our society/existence! I like the poem and cannot make any suggestions. It is very well written! *always, Cat" -
12 Fri
- May 2023
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15 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2022
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15 SunReceived a critique
on We Are from @scribbler
"not revealing who "we" are in my opinion makes this a better poem" -
15 Sun
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15 SunFirst publication
We Are
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15 Sun
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15 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Writer and spoken word artist
Location: Malawi
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