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Member since October 22, 2022
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Sore Dinosaur
I'm a dinosaur
my arms are too short
stretching makes me sore
I let out a destructive roar
I'm a monster of a special sort
I'm a dinosaur
I'm scaly to the core
I suck on the b-ball court
stretching makes me sore
When you run I'll step on your
tail. I kill for food, not sport
I'm a dinosaur!
Everyone can hear when I snore
I bring fear, not comfort
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stretching makes me sore
but then came the meteor
a for I couldn't thwart
I'm a dinosaur
stretching makes me sore
Debo’s timeline
- October 2023
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22 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2022
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22 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- April 2010
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30 Fri
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22 ThuCritiqued
"Whisper again" by @DawningDaytripper
"you and Ephraim, I'm gonna lose. :P Your's reads so smoothly; you barely even notice the rhyme or the form, 'cause it just melds so well! Stanza 1: Attach--> affix (maybe? perhaps? sounds cool I guess?) listeners--> lis…" -
22 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Whisper again" by @DawningDaytripper
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22 ThuReceived a critique
on Sore Dinosaur from @xena465
"A creative first write...well done Rosina xena465" -
21 WedFirst publication
Sore Dinosaur
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21 Wed
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I love to read poetry. I write what I feel. Weather that is poetry or not is up to the reader.
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