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Bryan
Member since May 17, 2012
Member for 14 years
So Glad to Be with You
“Hello, how are you? I’m Emily.”
“Emily, it’s Bill. I’m so glad to be with you.”
That said we go for a walk.
Wind our way through the town, we
were born here, married, raised children.
Strolling past the cemetery holding our parents,
Emily comments on the lovely statue of St. Michael.
“Hello, how are you? I’m Emily.”
“Emily, it’s Bill. I’m so glad to be with you.”
That said we go for a walk.
Sitting on the bench under the elm tree
looking across to the playground where we
watched our children grow and learn cooperation,
Emily comments on the stately statue of George Washington.
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“Hello, how are you? I’m Emily.”
“Emily, it’s Bill. I’m so glad to be with you.”
That said we go for a walk.
Down to the river where we swam as children
sitting on the fallen log where sixty years ago we sat
and I proposed and Emily completed me,
Emily comments on the rustic covered bridge.
And every day with Emily continues to complete me.
Bryan’s timeline
- May 2022
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17 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2017
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17 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2013
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17 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2012
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01 FriReceived a critique
on So Glad to Be with You from @loved
"“Hello, how are you? I’m Emily.” “Emily, it’s Bill. I’m so glad to be with you.” That said we go for a walk.... then throughout our lives we talk... both together now Emily says You first listen to me.. lovely Emily.. A…" - May 2012
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on So Glad to Be with You from @phxdreams
"Very powerful write! ..thank you so much for allowing me to read this." -
29 Tue
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25 Fri
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24 Thu
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23 Wed
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17 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 TueHighest posting month
May 2012 — 6 poems
- September 2008
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01 MonFirst publication
Fracture
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01 MonFirst critique offered
on "Mother Nature's Child" by @Rett
About Me
Poetry in form is my passion. My greatest influence are the imagists. I am also a photographer. Nature is my favorite subject. When shooting man made objects I look for the Japanese concept of 'aware."
Location: Western Mass, USA
Adelaide Crapsey
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Recent Work
So Glad to Be with You
Lobster Boats
Autumn Walk
Anita
Camp Breakfast
Fracture
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