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phxdreams
Member since October 28, 2010
Member for 15 years, 7 months
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Alzheimer's
Will you remember me tomorrow,
as you remembered me today?
Or will I become a stranger to you,
someone you will hold at bay.
How long will the memories last,
before they get lost within past's folds?
Will I need to remind you of stories of when?
Or will you hear them as though the first time told?
Will you remember the name you had given to me?
Or begin to see me as another's child?
Do you even recall the days of your youth?
When your vitality for life was running wild.
How long do I have until time takes you away,
and I am erased permantently from your mind?
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I pray that the worst of things leave you first,
so that you will only know of when the world was kind.
Always, will I treasure the moments given to us,
and be thankful for each blessed day.
Forever, in my heart you shall reside,
Even after your life has slipped away.
phxdreams’s timeline
- October 2025
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28 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- October 2020
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28 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- October 2015
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28 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2012
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27 FriReceived a critique
on Alzheimer's from @Ian.T
"This was a lovely piece of writing, the only thing I can say is no matter what happens to the other person as long as you remain the same.. May your ways be strong enough, to be yourself as time goes by, Yours Ian.T" - June 2012
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06 WedReceived a critique
on Angel Beneath the Trees from @Ian.T
"Your story is of many that stand and wait for something they need to run toward and hold tight never letting go.. Keep this as a story then convert it to a poem using the bones of the piece to give the reader that beaut…" - May 2012
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on Angel Beneath the Trees from @loved
"but how i wish we free verses don't miss no one reads epics glad yours many did" - April 2012
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30 Mon
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22 SunFirst publication
Angel Beneath the Trees
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22 Sun
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05 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Paper Airplanes" by @paul
- October 2011
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28 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2010
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28 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 542 days later.
About Me
Favorite Poets
My Favorite poet is Khalil Gibran
His book "The Prophet" was the first book I owned of his. I also
like Dr. Suess! :D. Pablo Neruda
Edgar Allan Poe ...and most of the well known poets. I really love to read the poetry of those whom are not known. I love the ability to be able to speak with the poets as well.
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