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BlueBerry
Member since February 6, 2026
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Morning mosaic
Burned my lip
On a sip of hot coffee
This morning.
It pushes my thoughts of being present
In this very moment,
Questioning life
And everything else.
An incomplete mosaic
Of a thousand pieces
Standing in the reflection
Right across from me.
A dose of caffeine,
The scent of the morning and
Parts of me on the other side
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In my peculiar mind
They don't clash.
The birds are chirping,
Insulting the silence around me.
They let their prelude swell,
Calling me to collaborate
With them.
Staring at my mosaic,
The clock ticking away,
Playful rhythm
Makes sense in this space.
Now I’m looking like a philosopher
Whose thoughts are being untangled.
The sun pierces through the window,
And my coffee is cold now.
Leaning back in the armchair,
I close my eyes,
Embracing all I am.
A ring at the door—
Ding ding dong—
Rousing me from a daze.
I ask who it is...
"It's me, Spring," it says.
Ouch.
I bite my burned lip.
BlueBerry’s timeline
- May 2026
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07 ThuCritiqued
"Embracing" by @Lavender
"After reading, this rainy day in May has taken on new, lovelier strokes of spring. To turn towards positive energy and embrace both good and bad, to close the door and move on. Truly beautifully captured in just a few l…" - March 2026
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27 FriReceived a critique
on Morning mosaic from @Geezer
"letting them 'rest' and mature on the stream can be most helpful. I see you as having good metaphor skills, show them off! ~ Geez." -
27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
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27 FriReceived a critique
on Morning mosaic from @Eliza
"An incomplete mosaic Of a thousand pieces Standing in the reflection Right across from me. Wow! Such beautiful language. Well done :) I really enjoyed reading your poem." -
27 FriReceived a critique
on Morning mosaic from @Geezer
"the early morning fuzz, bringing back one back to reality through the burned lip. I also like the implication that you are not ready for the day, and the bird's songs are an insult to the silence you have surrounded you…" -
26 Thu
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Guardian of my dreams from @Jane A. Rug
"even while wide awake with eyes wide shut, a plethora of yearnings finds me dreaming of a webbed wide world absent so much of the vile and vicious atrocities perpetrated courtesy one primate species, who genus and speci…" -
06 Fri
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06 FriCritiqued
"Burning Bridges" by @Valentin Hușman
"The setup of the poem is entirely postmodernist. I like it. You are moving in the same direction as with the other poems here. The structure is there, along with the rhythm you have established through the verses. You a…" -
06 FriCritiqued
"Be Careful with My Heart..." by @Geezer
"The poem is, if I may say, so simply composed, yet at the same time, it tells the story of a man whose heart was broken, but who, through the process of maturing, found himself and somewhat healed his heart from a faile…" -
02 MonReceived a critique
on Illusion No.1 from @Valentin Hușman
"I genuinely find this text interesting. It really makes me visualise the inertia of just existing. I love the images that you created. My only advice would be to also try some auditive images, it would give the images a…" -
02 MonReceived a critique
on Illusion No.1 from @Geezer
"Butterfly escaped From the lovely illusion In alluring journey I'm picking this one passage to ask about. I'm wondering if this is watching a butterfly escape from its cocoon, to begin its journey as a winged denizen of…" -
01 Sun
- February 2026
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13 FriReceived a critique
on The futility of a single gaze from @Geezer
"for sharing this different view of a beautiful Spring Day. We are most appreciative of your willingness to post only in English; this pom has improved with your edit. ~ Geezer. ." -
12 ThuReceived a critique
on The futility of a single gaze from @Geezer
"I am glad that you decided to repost this in English. I'm not sure, but I think that you are describing the morning of someone who is a lost poet and suffers from Achromatopsia. An interesting story. Am I wrong? I found…" -
12 ThuNew follower
@Geezer
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11 Wed
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06 FriFirst publication
Kontrast
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06 Fri
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06 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- May 2010
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12 WedCritiqued
"The Chemistry Of Character" by @ZARRANO
"The poems flows from one line to the next with perfect elegance. It's beautiful and touching. I love it!" -
12 WedFirst critique offered
on "The Chemistry Of Character" by @ZARRANO
About Me
About me
Little Poeta in Wonderland.
Writing in Bosnian and in English sometimes.
Vibing with good things.
Location: Bosnia and Herzegovina, BIH
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