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The Chemistry Of Character

Passion reigns supreme
undaunted by majestic horizons
The chemistry of our character
Is like an infusion of bliss
wiping away our tears with a kiss.
My love is like a perpetual symphony
playing for your heart alone
Embrace the special friendship we share
Evermore! The boundaries of eternity we dare.
I am waiting in vain for your love
to penetrate the threads of my essence
Like an alchemist mixing a tincture of desire
craving you igniting your fire.
The character of chemistry burning aglow
wanes on the edge of a tempest blow
Now we melt into each other like a change of weather
we go together like birds of a feather.
Souls without end forever we transcend
diminish not we eliminate the never
The chemistry of character our love Forever!
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Copyright © 2009
— ZARRANO, Feb 09, 2010

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Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 3 months ago

I enjoy this one very much.

But I would remove all of the words "like", as in "it is LIKE this" or "it is LIKE that". The word is unneeded. Also "birds of a feather"...too much of a cliche, way over-used. Try something else. But man, the imagery is great, you have a vision here that is clear in readers' minds, and it rocks. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Powerful presentation

You touch me with this one new friend. Magnifico!! Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"