Blaqueman

Member since October 23, 2012

Member for 13 years, 7 months

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12 Poems

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Damaged

Posted Jan 31, 2019 · 9 lines · 1 critiques

What makes my life so tragic?

That I want to die
And like magic
I become
Healed
Made of Stone
Cascaded in pain
Looking for love
I am damaged

Blaqueman’s timeline

October 2022
23 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2019
14 Thu

Received a critique
on Damaged from @swamp-witch
"I don't believe we've met, so if I missed your arrival here on site, let me give you a belated welcome to Neopoet! As someone who has dealt with depression and suicidal thoughts since I was about 13 (I am now 26), I thi…"
January 2019
31 Thu

Posted a poem
Damaged
"What makes my life so tragic?"
Open thread 9 lines
October 2017
23 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
November 2015
09 Mon

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @wesley snow
"I'm afraid I didn't much care for it. This is prose, not poetry."
October 2013
23 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2012
31 Wed

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @Ian.T
"Even your title is trying to put you in the wrong place, your writing sounds as if you don't value your existence here, or where you are, this is the second piece of yours I have read, and as you have noticed they and m…"
27 Sat

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"I'd cut this down a bit, writing poetry about writing poetry is boring, keep the interesting rhymes and get rid of the ones everyone has heard already. AMERKYA and NACERIMA mean nothing to me, (as an Australian) you are…"
27 Sat

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @BlueDemon77
"Spit and grip on the freedom tip. An emblazoned caucasian who digs the street rhapsody, soliloquy of the disenfranchised who witness the lies, alibis bought and paid for, playful no more. Meet pissed with a fist and get…"
27 Sat

Posted a poem
All I need( poetic suicide)
"All I need in this life is my pen some paper and a knife because when it comes to poetry I go insane in the brain and can't be contained I am on fire!!! Question my desire and I shall burn u like timber leaving u almost dismembered but u remember me from grade k through 3 I am that test u never passed that feeling u wouldn't couldn't or shouldn't last in my arena called education I am as amazing as a refugee lost in the wilderness"
Open thread 16 lines
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Deeper than poetry from @Ross Hamilton Hill
"Hi Sorry but there is a lot wrong with this. Firstly the layout, if you want line breaks put them in, don't use / as this has another purpose. Using 'fuck' is crude, using 'I make her predicate all over my pencil' is cr…"
23 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
July 2010
01 Thu

Received a critique
on Embryo from @yenti
"Hi welcome to Neo, this piece though the theme is good it was a wee bit untidy in its form so it seemed not to run smoothly, just a touch of edit here and there will be great, look forward to future writes from you, You…"
June 2010
26 Sat

Received a critique
on CLOUDZ from @scribbler
"here I was thinking this would be a weather poem lol! Not sure why but I really liked this........scribbler"
26 Sat

Posted a poem
CLOUDZ
"Is my skin brown because I drink chocolate milk?"
Open thread 27 lines
24 Thu

Posted a poem
DAY I DIED [ part one]
"The day I died"
Open thread 32 lines
24 Thu

Critiqued
"Flower and Butterfly (Poem)" by @JahJahBrie
"You paint a vivid picture that anyone Including myself can appreciate its beauty"
24 Thu

First critique offered
on "Flower and Butterfly (Poem)" by @JahJahBrie
23 Wed

Posted a poem
fuck it {IM LEAVIN}
"SO YOU NAYSAYERS"
Open thread 29 lines
18 Fri

Posted a poem
Embryo
"I was birthed , a embryo"
Open thread 29 lines
16 Wed

Posted a poem
F.A.T.H.E.R.
"You didn't care about me"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
June 2010 — 9 poems
14 Mon

Posted a poem
BARZ aka poetic drug dealer
"God only knows"
Open thread 90 lines
12 Sat

Posted a poem
scenez in united states and abroad
"A man dies in the street"
Open thread 37 lines
10 Thu

Posted a poem
my life , your tragedy
"Even if I drew you a map"
Open thread 54 lines
08 Tue

First publication
AMERYKA (tribunal)
08 Tue

Posted a poem
AMERYKA (tribunal)
"AMeryka"
Open thread 31 lines