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Jun 10, 2010
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my life , your tragedy
Even if I drew you a map
Or lent you a compass
You could never ever see
What I want to accomplish
Staking my claim
Carefully aiming my
Metaphoric missiles
Hoping that you too
Bleed poetry
Hanging on to verbs
I commit poetic suicide
All the while bleeding
Nouns and word sounds
Like
Ouch
Ooh
A
I stay daydreamin
On a cloud
My pen
Screams
I am poetry
We are poetry
Your not done
Keep writing son
I even have time
To take my girl
On a date
Her name is Poetry sonnet
She sings in the most beautiful tune in the month of june
And she sings for me
In the key of
Lalalalala
Oohooh
Yeah
I got soul
But I know
This
Poetry
And I are one
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Just jumped off a metaphor
Poetic suicide
I awake to find
I aint dead
Living in the land of scars and stripes[slavery]
Not stars and stripes[liberty]
Or coffins so often portrayed on tv [death]
Waiting on my spaceship
[Exit stage left]
BRrrrrrrrnnnnnnngggggggg
Wake up son
Class is still
In session
— Blaqueman, Jun 10, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
God, I love your
Blaqueman
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you very much Its well
Blaqueman
16 years 1 month ago
THAnk you also My motivation
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
There’s nothing but god,
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Hey Blaqueman
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