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Jun 10, 2010
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my life , your tragedy
Even if I drew you a map
Or lent you a compass
You could never ever see
What I want to accomplish
Staking my claim
Carefully aiming my
Metaphoric missiles
Hoping that you too
Bleed poetry
Hanging on to verbs
I commit poetic suicide
All the while bleeding
Nouns and word sounds
Like
Ouch
Ooh
A
I stay daydreamin
On a cloud
My pen
Screams
I am poetry
We are poetry
Your not done
Keep writing son
I even have time
To take my girl
On a date
Her name is Poetry sonnet
She sings in the most beautiful tune in the month of june
And she sings for me
In the key of
Lalalalala
Oohooh
Yeah
I got soul
But I know
This
Poetry
And I are one
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Just jumped off a metaphor
Poetic suicide
I awake to find
I aint dead
Living in the land of scars and stripes[slavery]
Not stars and stripes[liberty]
Or coffins so often portrayed on tv [death]
Waiting on my spaceship
[Exit stage left]
BRrrrrrrrnnnnnnngggggggg
Wake up son
Class is still
In session
— Blaqueman, Jun 10, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
God, I love your
Blaqueman
15 years 12 months ago
Thank you very much Its well
Blaqueman
15 years 12 months ago
THAnk you also My motivation
Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
There’s nothing but god,
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Hey Blaqueman