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The Treasure Chest

Posted May 15, 2013 · 16 lines · 3 critiques

I invite you to open the treasure chest of our mind
The more you look
The more you find
Savor the golden ambrosia from our mental cookbook.

In the space of the Universe, infinity abound
The mind the micro-mirror of the macro
Thoughts, feelings, ideas, creativity profound
Abundant harvest from little seeds can grow.

The problems of the world weigh heavy
Rotten thoughts produce inferior fruit
Change the flow and open the levy
New results can begin to take root.

Intellectual endeavor, infinite inspiration
Flowing from the fount of forever
Treasure chest of our mind collaboration
Creating new recipes for transcendence together.

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Received a critique
on The Treasure Chest from @Ian.T
"Just a play with the first Stanza that seems to be causing some worries . I invite you to open the treasures of the mind The more you seek The more you find Savor the ambrosia from our thoughtful leak . Well I tried lol…"
16 Thu

Received a critique
on The Treasure Chest from @scribbler
"And welcome to neopoet. I think that the word cookbook is not the problem with that line but , rather , that the line is a bit long. Try dropping golden and see if that "fixes" it. Always good to see another rhyming poe…"
15 Wed

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on "Fading Mask" by @arsinBW
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The Treasure Chest
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"I invite you to open the treasure chest of our mind"
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