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BelindaR
Member since May 14, 2013
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The Treasure Chest
I invite you to open the treasure chest of our mind
The more you look
The more you find
Savor the golden ambrosia from our mental cookbook.
In the space of the Universe, infinity abound
The mind the micro-mirror of the macro
Thoughts, feelings, ideas, creativity profound
Abundant harvest from little seeds can grow.
The problems of the world weigh heavy
Rotten thoughts produce inferior fruit
Change the flow and open the levy
New results can begin to take root.
Intellectual endeavor, infinite inspiration
Flowing from the fount of forever
Treasure chest of our mind collaboration
Creating new recipes for transcendence together.
BelindaR’s timeline
- May 2023
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14 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2018
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14 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2014
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14 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2013
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18 SatReceived a critique
on The Treasure Chest from @Ian.T
"Just a play with the first Stanza that seems to be causing some worries . I invite you to open the treasures of the mind The more you seek The more you find Savor the ambrosia from our thoughtful leak . Well I tried lol…" -
16 ThuReceived a critique
on The Treasure Chest from @scribbler
"And welcome to neopoet. I think that the word cookbook is not the problem with that line but , rather , that the line is a bit long. Try dropping golden and see if that "fixes" it. Always good to see another rhyming poe…" -
16 ThuNew follower
@Jaq Cee
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15 WedCritiqued
"A Public Health Warning" by @Indie Skreet
"I really like the twist at the end - your silly mind. I like the alternating rhyming rhythm and the flow as well. You are a good writer - and this had some good dry humor." -
15 Wed
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15 WedCritiqued
"values" by @ephraimcrud
"I like how each stanza starts out shorter and then gets longer. It has a nice flow and clip to it. I also like the way the second and third line always rhymes. Good work." -
15 WedCritiqued
"Fading Mask" by @arsinBW
"I thought the flow had a nice clip - clip to it. The poem definitely made sense throughout. I can see the clown acting out without any emotion - dead man's stare. Dark - but good." -
15 WedFirst critique offered
on "Fading Mask" by @arsinBW
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15 WedFirst publication
The Treasure Chest
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15 Wed
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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