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arshiyafairy
Member since March 21, 2011
Member for 15 years, 2 months
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Worthy World...
Truth is now lost,
in this earthly world,
love now a ghost,
torturing souls with its meaningless words...
Turning their selfish motives real,
people play with tender hearts,
sensitivity of emotions they steal,
without caring how much it hurts...
Considering unspoken words and patience,
as an advantage to fool someone...
People forget they are also humans,
but with extremely foolish minds,
having thought good for no one...
Maybe someday they'll have to face the same,
and then realization will end their mean game...
Maybe then the world will again look worthy,
to live in and to love truly....
arshiyafairy’s timeline
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15 years of membership
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5 years of membership
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One year of membership
- November 2011
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on Alive without you... from @Candlewitch
"And welcome to Neo Poet. My only suggestion is that you don't use the (non)word "Cos" as this is poetry and not a note to a friend or an e-mail. You have some good ideas here. Try to develope them and expand on them. al…" -
10 ThuReceived a critique
on Worthy World... from @Race_9togo
"I like this, it has promise. I like the theme very much, and I think it all hangs together quite well. I think though that it is a bit prosaic, and would benefit from a careful re-write, to focus its message and emotion…" -
03 Thu
- May 2011
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30 MonReceived a critique
on An Untold Story from @scribbler
"I see Rosina has already given a lot of help. My main suggestion is to check carefully for typos before submitting .One or two is not unusual, but too many really disrupts reading. This poem will really do a great job c…" -
30 MonFirst critique offered
on "DOUBTS ON A STORMY NIGHT" by @scribbler
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06 Fri
- April 2011
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20 WedFirst publication
GOOD FRIDAY 2011
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20 Wed
- March 2011
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21 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 30 days later.
About Me
About me
I started writing 4 years back.I wrote very less,I was usually more involved in studies.But slowly i got a passion for writing as i grew.Now I'm trying to improve my wrirings,I hope You will make me improve on my writings.....
Location: INDIA, IND
Favorite Poets
Shelley
Byron
Sarojini Naidu
Vikram seth
Pablo Neruda
Robert Frost n some more..Frankly
I have read very less....
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