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Alyssa
Member since August 4, 2026
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Keys to a Dream
Mystical eyes peer from the shadows.
Watching, waiting.
What will your next move be?
Light glimmers faintly across velvet whispers, each tone a gateway to another realm.
Which door to traverse next?
Golden keys chime softly, the hour of night is dense.
Moonlit dreams swirl in a comfortable knowing, settling deep within.
Release the ego's hold for a moment, the vision is yours to behold.
Reach slowly as to not disturb the fickle answers you've sought for so long.
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- August 2026
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11 TueReceived a critique
on Keys to a Dream from @TheWanderer78
"My pleasure. Feel free to message me if you want to explore further. :)" -
11 TueReceived a critique
on Keys to a Dream from @TheWanderer78
"Oops, apologies, I mixed up 2 different pieces I've been commenting on. Disregard my last comment! I think a consistent syllable/meter for this particular piece would go a long way in tying together the imagery and the…" -
11 TueReceived a critique
on Keys to a Dream from @TheWanderer78
"Of course! I don't think you need to change it honestly. It wasn't a criticism; it was more a statement that the piece doesn't rely on traditional iambic pentameter construction, and succeeds rhythmically without it." -
10 MonNew follower
@alicespagnol7
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10 MonReceived a critique
on Keys to a Dream from @TheWanderer78
"I really like the word choice and imagery here. The piece creates a sense of hazy illusion, like the reader is in a reality subject to change at any moment. It does feel like being in a dream where nothing is quite comp…" -
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07 FriFirst publication
Keys to a Dream
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04 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
About me
I'm from the south east U.S.A. I'm inspired by the mystery of the inner self and the beauty in nature.
I've never shared any of my poems before. I thought an online community would be an interesting start.
Location: USA
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