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aeron maccloud
Member since March 20, 2018
Member for 8 years, 2 months
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“Let it go. Let it out.
Let it all unravel.
Let it free and it can be
A path on which to travel.”
Michael Leunig.
Annarcheyes adores Leunig,
The world’s best visual poet
But he can’t see
The pain that she
needs to cause,
her sacrificial suckling pig
Annarcheyes enacts a plan
For thethe grisly demise of a man
Whose crimes , like Fortunato’s,
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Need not be named
Yet the vengeance and pain
Need to be fully explained
Annarcheyes rufies the beast
He awakes in the dark
Naked and bound
And hears the hoarse whispered sounds
Of his fate,
The noted Killer will miss this feast.
“There won’t be much pain,
I want you alive,
On a drip, local anaesthetic
First you starve
Then I feed you your feet
Your pursuit of prey won’t be so fleet
“Then your hands go down your throat
You won’t be so quick to gloat
Over grabbing
(did I mention the mirror overhead?
Your eyes will be last)
An appropriate repast
“Force feed in no particular order
Your ears, tongue, balls and dick
(with Maxolon!
Thou shalt not be sick)
None have any significance
In your general gender disorder.
“Then the eyes, the pain now real
Dumped at a hospital
You’ll be kept alive
As utterly helpless in fact
As you made me feel”
aeron maccloud’s timeline
- March 2023
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20 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2019
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23 MonNew follower
@Edna Sweetlove
- March 2019
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20 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2018
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05 MonReceived a critique
on Annarcheyes Replies from @zebra
"your fuckin weird ...no wonder I like you ;) For thethe grisly demise of a man...are you being esoteric or do you need to fix this? Pls provide some context for me she provides pain to her suckling pig ...so lucky for h…" -
05 Mon
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05 Mon
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05 MonCritiqued
"Tilting At Windmills..." by @Geezer
"haven't been around for a while, busy little bee with study and necessary accompaniment of partying. This suited me rather savage mood of late though to me it cries out for more attention to meter. I just posted a new p…" -
05 Mon
- May 2018
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Not a groupy from @raj
"I didn't say that your poetry doesn't challenge anything...what I meant was do not hesitate to post stuff if that's going to bring about a change...hope that clarifies my comment…" -
20 SunReceived a critique
on Not a groupy from @scribbler
"as I'm aware there is no minimum age restriction on joining but I think there are few if any pre teens on site." -
20 SunReceived a critique
on Not a groupy from @Geezer
"read some of my "Killer" stuff to get an idea of what you can post here. Sometimes Killer is somewhat graphic. I don't believe that I have ever posted anything really pornographic and really haven't seen the limits test…" -
20 SunReceived a critique
on Not a groupy from @raj
"your signature is pretty straight forward "If poetry doesn't change anything it isn't anything."...so i would look forward to read your poems conforming to it…" -
20 Sun
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- April 2018
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21 SatCritiqued
"Slipped" by @riotface97
"Why not say it all at once and honestly? Blame the guilty and I would not be above some bloody vengeance against the destroyers. Fuck justice, the destroyers never get it. You know who to blame, don't you? The top place…" -
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10 Tue
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09 MonCritiqued
"Doldrum Gold" by @fink555
"Hope you don't mind the goth part of that, maybe Kubla Khan on some more modern pharmaceutical than opium. It's cool but 'what does it all mean'?" -
09 MonCritiqued
"Monsters I've Met" by @fink555
"I don't like lying to children. Most monsters will take your blood or head or worse." -
09 MonCritiqued
"thought for the day" by @valene
"I like it, but could you give it a bit more punch? I like punching." - March 2018
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27 TueNew follower
@weirdelf
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27 Tue
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20 TueCritiqued
"Self - Deception " by @axe11e
"I'm not sure what to say here but they say you should offer critique where you can. Maybe we can help each other out. I like the poem. It set a mood and tone really well. Love that word 'occluding'. That last line would…" -
20 TueFirst critique offered
on "Self - Deception " by @axe11e
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20 TueFirst publication
Waiting rooms prolong the gloom of impending doom
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20 Tue
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20 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Punk rocker. Bad grrl. Musician.
Not a poet, a worker in a cultural context.
If poetry doesn't change anything it isn't anything.
Location: Australia, AUS
Favorite Poets
2pac
Hecate (Aussie female punk band)
Bukowskie
The Romantics
Shakespeare
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