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2minichinz
Member since September 12, 2013
Member for 12 years, 8 months
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2minichinz’s timeline
- September 2023
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12 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- September 2018
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12 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2014
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12 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2013
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10 SunReceived a critique
on beautiful places (rework) from @scribbler
"I didn't read your first attempt so I'll just comment on this one lol. Seems you've seen a lot over time I've also seen a lot of what you so eloquently described. The only obvious flaw in your poem (I think) is the sile…" - October 2013
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20 SunReceived a critique
on beautiful places (rework) from @Bonitaj
"I love the content: it takes me to all the places of wonder you have been to and seen. One last suggestion - perhaps breaks with paragraphs would make more of an impact. IMO just too much to take in - in one long.... fr…" -
18 FriReceived a critique
on beautiful places (rengö) from @Ian.T
"What a beautiful Tanka, me as usual will go check all the syllables, this one is so near perfect. One word seems to have me foiled :- aged (monastery) high on. It keeps coming up as 8 syllables. This drives me mad as ac…" -
14 MonFirst critique offered
on "Late Alfred Digit" by @Ian.T
- September 2013
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15 SunFirst publication
coming storm (tanka) (since unpublished)
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12 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
About me
I am retired after 40 years of the UNIX/LINUX rat race. I have written since I was a child. Writing is the only thing I have ever wanted to do. I am married and have a beautiful daughter who lives at home because thoughtless doctors nearly ended her life and left her health in a shambles. I was born in Monterey but as a Navy brat, I lived many, many places. I lived in Iowa, Kansas and Missouri for 38 years before making it back to Monterey, the place of my heart.
Location: Monterey County, California, USA
Favorite Poets
Robert Frost
Ogden Nash
Emily Dickinson
William Blake
Wordsworth
Dylan Thomas
Walt Whitman
Carl Sandburg
Joshua Converse
lots of others
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Workshops
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| The Bottom Line | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2013-09-09 | Concluded |