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Yacubi
Member since October 17, 2024
Member for 1 year, 7 months
Two Rivers
Two rivers descend from their mountain source
Over the edge, barefoot towards their destinies
One finds open horizons, free flowing courses
The other, hidden beauty, silent testimony
Two rivers race towards the shoreless ocean
Boulders to pebbles, meandering their flow
One becomes a city slicker in slow motion
The other, to an ancient oasis it shall go
Yacubi’s timeline
- October 2025
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17 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2024
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25 FriReceived a critique
on Two Rivers from @Geezer
"ladies say, this sounds like a tale of siblings, maybe even a set of twins. I like how it details the differences between the two and makes it that much more interesting. The meter is a little ragged but can be fixed ea…" -
25 FriReceived a critique
on Two Rivers from @Rula
"I totally agree with Candle. My thought is that metaphor for something hidden. What ever it implies, the imagery is first class and flows as cool as river would. Bravo!" -
25 FriReceived a critique
on Two Rivers from @Candlewitch
"This is a beautiful poem. It could be a metaphor with hidden layers! It could be for two siblings. *hugs, Cat" -
25 Fri
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22 TueReceived a critique
on Oceans of Love from @Candlewitch
"Please do not take to heart everything that AI says. It is without heart or soul and cannot see the beauty of the poem! I adore that you have tackled the subject of "Love" and the many nuances. my favorite lines are: Lo…" -
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17 ThuReceived a critique
on Seamstress’ Battle Cry from @Rula
"followed you back. You have such a rich content there!" -
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17 ThuReceived a critique
on Seamstress’ Battle Cry from @Rula
"A warm welcome to Neopoet. An evocative creative piece. It's really striking how you've used every days' tools and tasks as weapons to conquer the daily challenges. Much enjoyed and looking forward to reading more of yo…" -
17 ThuReceived a critique
on Seamstress’ Battle Cry from @Candlewitch
"Welcome to Neopoet! If you have any questions please send me a private message and I will do my best to help! *hugs, Cat" -
17 ThuFirst publication
Seamstress’ Battle Cry
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17 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 TueHighest posting month
October 2024 — 5 poems
About Me
Adli Jacobs is a highly experienced media professional, having worked in the industry for over 25 years. With a diverse background in journalism, design and layout, government communications, research, community radio broadcasting, and magazine editing, Adli has established himself as a skilled and accomplished writer and communicator.
As an author, Adli has published two books, Punching Above Its Weight: The Story of the Call of Islam and Capturing the Fire: The Sally Little Story. He is also a respected lecturer in journalism and media studies, and a sought-after media consultant and strategist.
Adli is passionate about people, and loves to connect, converse, debate, mentor, and learn from others. He brings this same passion and energy to his writing, which is characterised by a deep engagement with social and political issues, as well as a commitment to excellence, integrity, and respect.
Location: South Africa, ZAF
Philip Larkin
Kahlil Gibran
William Blake
Shabbir Banoobhai
Refaat Alareer
James Matthews
Pablo Neruda
Jalaluddin Rumi
Maya Angelou
Antjie Krog
Recent Work
Two Rivers
Oceans of Love
Seamstress’ Battle Cry
Seamstress’ Battle Cry
Seamstress’ Battle Cry
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